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for What You See Isn't Yours

by Mitmiya

person Kodachi
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting so far. Can't wait to see what happens next. However, I still prefer SetoxJou, though i don't mind seeing JouxKisara meanwhile, as long as the arrogant CEO get his puppy in the end. However, I do want to see a happy ending for Kisara. She's a nice girl in the story so far.
person Hoorah
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww... it won't be as fun if Kaiba doesn't get his mutt. ^_^ Though Kisara should give him a hard time for not getting him first. =P
person koalared
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My vote: Jou & Seto. :)
person Terry
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You put this story in the yaoi section and ask me who Joey should end up with : the girl or the guy? SETO! He's the puppy! Get that "stinkin' rich boy" to get his act straight, bitch fight with Kisara and get his puppy. BTW great fic, i'll definitely be reading updates since you dare threaten the sanctity of man-on-man action ;)
person Reyn
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i want jou to be with Seto!! they totally belong together!!
person Reyn
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wah! this chapter is too short! But at least we get to see things from Kaiba's POV
person nicky again
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah, now look at the crap that I'm telling...
OF COURSE Jou's eyes are NOT green, they're brown... duh! Stupid nicky!
Still Seto's aren't green either...
Anyway... feel free to kick my butt ;-)
person nicky
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I like it! I mean, the idea behind it is really interesting.
I don't really get what you hold against Seto, though... He's a real good guy, actually.
And it's not his fault that people write fanfics about him and Serenity, is it?
Oh and... there was one tiny mistake, i think... You were talking about Seto's eyes... but ... they're not green, they're blue (Jou's eyes are green)
Anyway, looking for the next update :-)
person Reyn
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I read everything, from the summary to your nagging voice (hehe) to the actual chapter. And as long as Jou and Kaiba get together in the end, I totally approve ^_^

I like how this fic is taken seriously with no 'serenity bashing' or anything like that. Keep up the excellent work and update soon!