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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story you have here! The character development and relationship building is superb, I can't wait to find out how this all ends. Hopefully with a nice MarikxMalik lemon! Buahaha! Anyway, keep up the great work and please don't take too long to update, you really leave the readers hanging there at the end of chapter 16. I'll be really looking forwards to the next installment of this fic. >=) Bye for now.
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can`t wait to find out what is going to happen here. I have never read something so good. I hope to see this finished soon.
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CONTINUE!!
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i absoultely ( heart) this story to pieces. a strange one, i am, i like stories like this. creepy - i know. i would luv to see sequel. it's so amazingly good, this story. i cannot wait for the next chapter(s). you rock! keep on writing!
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, I knew he would try and pass for Malik!!! great chapter as usual!!! *jumps up and down waiting for the rest* :D
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
By the way I've been watching the Yu-Gi-Oh anime DVDs of both Duelisht Kingdom and Battle City, and you were right, Bakura's deck is creepy! i freaked out when I saw what kind of monsters he had! One of them is Dark Necrofear, and Dark Santactuary freaked me out! If you play the latter, the landscape turns red, and you're instant surrounded by eyes! I felt like i was watching a battle in hell! *shudders* The horror! The horror! If you want to see the exact kind, go and rent the Battle City Duels dvds!
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man...I sincerely hope that Malik isn't going to confront his father. Yes, it'd be closure but my gosh, that's courting disaster! I can't wait to see what more you have for us. Update soon!
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hoy crap I can't believe there are only 2 more chapters!!!!
I can't wait to find out what happens!!!!
I can't wait to find out what happens!!!!
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And its all coming together beautifully!!..I can't wait!!!!..^____^
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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man am I hooked on this one. Shy is evil! Evil I tell you. Drac, don't let her shy cuteness fool you....she's gotten me hooked on this stuff I tell ya! With that out of the way......here's Shy's review^_~
Shy's Review: "Oh I'm so very worried now. I'm glad that Ashida is going to get his (she blushed at this comment, I swear) I hope Marik knows what he's doing."
Oh, nearly forgot! Shy was saying your idea of how to take that mother puss bucket down is wayyy better than hers. And even though I'm her best friend, I think I totally agree with her. This idea sounds like it's going to rock!
Keep it up!!!!
Note to self: No sugar before making a review. *waves*
Shy's Review: "Oh I'm so very worried now. I'm glad that Ashida is going to get his (she blushed at this comment, I swear) I hope Marik knows what he's doing."
Oh, nearly forgot! Shy was saying your idea of how to take that mother puss bucket down is wayyy better than hers. And even though I'm her best friend, I think I totally agree with her. This idea sounds like it's going to rock!
Keep it up!!!!
Note to self: No sugar before making a review. *waves*