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for Dark Roses

by DracOnyx

person Silvershadowfire
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I must admit, that is a HELL of a way to get even with him. You go girl!

Great chapter - am looking forward to more!

*Yami SSF's evil, satisfied laughter echoes in the background*
person xSakurax
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now, I give that last chapter a HELL YEAH. He got what he deserved. And that's the bottomline cuz Stonecold said so! Well, not literally ^^;;;...ha ha ha, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Byez!
person Tashica
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WWHHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTTTTT!!! *glomps you AND Terri* YAY!!! *cackles evily* THAT WAS COOOL! although....I woulda made it MORE painful, but still it was GOOD! *grins* Sooo....YAY!! *runs around happily*
person Malik the Psycho
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Cackles!* Good job! Keep writing, I was very amused by this chapter, even though I'm only half awake. XD
person Kenz
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it, its sicking with such sweet torture.
Keep it up
person leighc for shy
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy Mary Mother of God woman but you two just blew my mind! I thought Shy was going to pass out....her eyes just got wider and wider and her face took on a very unhealthy shade of pale. But we both agreed completely that jack donkey got what he deserved. We're very pleased and impressed....of course Shy can't believe she's thinking that. Oh...here I am going on and on *rolls eyes at self*

Here's Shy's review: "I....I....oh....may no one ever get on their bad side. Sweet Bridgette."

Yeah....you pretty much left the shyness highness even more speechless than usual. Keep it up girl and give that soul sister of yours a big hug from us too yeah?
person Lady Laran
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY CRAP!!!!

I was expecting devious justice, but that just took the cake, ice cream, and the entire bakery/sweet shop! PERFECT JUSTICE!!!! I love it!!!

*glomphs and huggles*

person Silvershadowfire
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This anticipation is driving me up the wall! *bounces up and down* I want to know what's gonna happen! Please?

Great story, great chapter and I hope you update soon!
person LadyGrey
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love when you update, dear. Great chapter, and neat way of bringing the pup into all of this! Now, one thing, however..... please please please tell me Malik's not stupid enough to go face his father by himself to protect Marik? He should jus sit back and trust the 'yamis' to take care of things. *sigh* But, hold on, you write angst.... this is gonna suck, isn't it? Heh. Can't wait for the final chapters -- email me back, Lane can't wait to find out if 'Kura was/is able to respond to her taunting. *tacklehugs*
person MarikIshtar77
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha! I finally got a chance to read this from the beginning. (Sorry it took me so long!) Great stuff here! I love your work! YoU tOtaLLy RaWk!
Can't wait to see what's gonna happen to Malik's dad. I hope it's reallllllly twisted! *giggle*