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for Dark Roses

by DracOnyx

person Lady Shinigami
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SQUEE!!! They're breaking him down at last!! Oh, poor Malik . . . He really needs some love and they're JUST the ones to do it! I ADORE the part where Yugi flipped those bounty hunters (or servants or whatever) the bird--it was just so . . . un-Yugi-like but totally understandable in the face of Malik's past. I'd've done it too, were it me.

Bakura should definitely spill some more blood, by the way.

I'm glad this bunny is so rabid--it means more to read more often!!


~LS
person Silvershadowfire
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Stalker? I don't know WHAT you are talking about! (hysterical laughter)

Yami SSF: Sigh

Anyway, loved that chapter, even if it was as much a setup as anything. Please update soon...not only do I want to hear Malik's story, but I want to see the reactions of the others. You've already established that all the realtionships are rather open - IE Yami and Bakura sharing a kiss - so I get the feeling that they are a very loving, supportive bunch. (Psychotic tendancies aside)
person Lady Laran
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome update! Marik and Kura can be almost unstoppable at times, huh? hehe...I guess I'll have to save the rabid wombat for another evil cliffy....
person ladywolf_Terri
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful chapter!!!!...And now I am going to be bugging the hell out of you for the next one!!..^_~...*huge huggles*..Can't wait!!
person ChaosDragon61
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm not usually one for Marik/Malik stories, i'm more of a Yami/Yugi or Seto/Yami BUT this is really good! I can't wait to read more. And you had me cracking up with your last review to my story. lol thanks i needed a laugh!
person Deb
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! Maliks finally letting go of his emotions! ....kinda heh
Greatnessssss!!!
Loved this chapter!
Marik is so cute when he's like that hehe
Please update again soonies hun!
I cant wait for more!!!
Luv
Debs xxx
person Kadaj
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!you better not make me cry, keep writing pleaseeeeee!!!!!
and i really love your fanfic. ^-^
person aspiker
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Trust... don't it all just come down to it....

The quick pacing of the writing went well with Malik's escape and the fight (go Bakura and his bloodlust!). I've got that box of Kleenex ready for the next few chapters ready...
person Deb
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg!
*teardrop*
Poor malik! I want to hug him so tight the poor thing!
This is great huni!
Please update again soonies!!
Luv
Debs xxx
person Shinigami24
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*whistles* U do realize that when Malik's father shows up, only one person will survive what Yami, Bakura, and Marik has in store for him? Pls set Seto up with Joey! And pls bring Joey in somehow!