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I love the end note there trying to save your ass!!..XD..smart!..Anyways..wow..yeah his father needs to be seriously harmed..like buried alive in a fire ant nest...oh!..or you just need a knife and rat..*eyes glaze over before snapping back*..yeah..torture thoughts later..^_^;;...wonderful chapter (albiet poor Malik!!) as always sister of my soul!! *tons of huggles* Can't wait for the next one!!

wow...i always seem to catch you right as you update :) gotta love that.
Another wonderful chapter. Your storytelling ability is unprecidented. I can't wait to read more

AAAAH POOR MALIK! -clings to him- He'll be okaaaaay! Yay for Marik, he rocks ^_^ Go Mari, and Bakura, and Yami... and Yugi and Ryou, of course!

This is an awesome story! I am so totally in love with it -nod- You must keep writing!

I'll have tissues for the next chapter... I have them on my desk! teehee, my damn nose... yay!

-runs around-

can't wait for the next chapter!

teehee, deju va ^^ i did this the same time yesterday! kinda...well...yeah!

i'm not going to eat you ^_^ just eat Malik's dad, the stupid mongrel! Yay for Marik, Bakura and Yami ^_^ Yami is such a lovely guy...and all!

weee more!

YOU make ME cry!!!! and no i not going to kill you, WHY? because like bakura said you are not going to finish this and make a happy ending
but i will think about it, YOU make ME cry...anyway me want more pweseeeeeee!!!!!!!

*teardrop*
Poor Malik...poor little lamb -__-;;
Im glad he has found the group...and i hope he can learn to love them ^_^
*is ever the optimistic*
Please update soon hun!!
I cant wait to see what happens now!
Luv
Debs xxx

OMG!! -sniffles- THAT...THAT...OOohhh, THAT MAN!! -grabs baseball bat- Can I hit him...just once!?! Ooohohooh BETTer...-grabs pen- CAN I CASTRATE HIM WITH A PEN!!??!?! PUH-LEEZZZE!?! I wont kill you, but I'll kill him...and puh-leeeezeies update sooon..-grins and hugs- I likes this alot!!

ACK! tissues required? More of them?? Poor Malik!
Seriously though, I love your style of writing. You obviously put a lot of thought and time into your work.
Another chapterous triumph

Another good chapter! I esp. enjoyed the leap of faith Malik finally took --> all due to a simple act of kindness and affection from Ryou.

Now get out of the cave.... ;-)

This is one of the best stories i've read on not onlky adultfanfiction.net but also fanfiction.net, i love malik angst especially ones where he has no friends and had an incredibly abusive,
horrible past, thos are vthe angsiest. Also you shouldn't focus on the amount of reviwes you have receieved but on the amount of people visiting who are really interested in your fic and you have plenty of those to keep going on wit your story and finish it. This is becasue most of the people that read fanfics anywhere are just to lazy to review or don't have the time after they are done reading, i'm one of those people that rarely gives reviews, i just read those fanfics and wait for the next chapter. Dont just count the reviwes you have received as that being the only amount of people interested in your fics. keep it up wiuth the story and i'm hoping you have trhe time to complete, i love this fic.