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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG. That was just beautiful... some of your best work. I was breathless. It was so moving, and poetic, and everything...
Absolutely beautiful.
Absolutely beautiful.
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!!!!
Lovely lemon too ^_~
Cant wait to read more huni!
This fic is so intriguing!
Much Luv
Debs xx
Lovely lemon too ^_~
Cant wait to read more huni!
This fic is so intriguing!
Much Luv
Debs xx
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this and thank you for the update. I can`t wait for more. Keep up the great work.
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, just read your story (so far). Overall it is well written, with the spelling (check) and punctuation (check) in accord.
However, I was a little disappointed. Reading the summary, I expected a Marik/Malik story. However, so far it's been more of a Ryou/Malik, and now a Ryou/Yugi/Malik - with only hints of Marik/Malik (and a Bakura/Yami scene to boot). And yes, I read ch.9 where you explained about love and sex. My point is - maybe a note in the summary about the other pairings? For a Bronzeshipper like me, it was a bit of an unpleasant surprise.
However, I was a little disappointed. Reading the summary, I expected a Marik/Malik story. However, so far it's been more of a Ryou/Malik, and now a Ryou/Yugi/Malik - with only hints of Marik/Malik (and a Bakura/Yami scene to boot). And yes, I read ch.9 where you explained about love and sex. My point is - maybe a note in the summary about the other pairings? For a Bronzeshipper like me, it was a bit of an unpleasant surprise.
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG i like totally love this story!!! youre a legend already.
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww... sweet lemon between 'Kura and Yami... and I love your characterizations of Yugi and Ryou in this story too. They're so kawaii, you just have to squeeze the life out of them! Great chapter, please update, and Lane says she has some ideas for Marik, should you need 'em. Ja ne!
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
tis a anotehr good chapter ^.^
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAaawwwwww....I liked that one alot! heh
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I. Really. Like. Your. Stories!!!!!! I'm a big fan of Gravitation and off course of Dark Roses!! They are really superb!! It maybe sound odd, but i like this kind of stories and the characters of Yu Gi Oh.. Keep writing the next chappies, and could you please tell if you write a sequel of Gravitation. (I dont know if there is one yet ;))
I love your work, so dont disappoint me by stop writing (never do!!)
-xxx- SilverLipsGirl (alias Magiciangirly)
I love your work, so dont disappoint me by stop writing (never do!!)
-xxx- SilverLipsGirl (alias Magiciangirly)
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHOOT!! yami and Bakura got it on!! hmm you made my day! lol thanks!