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for Dark Roses

by DracOnyx

schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yum yum.....HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! God, that kissing scene..it almost made me wish I was in on that. hehe...anyway, great chapter. I think a Kura/Marik lemon scene might be a bit of fun.
person Silvershadowfire
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, that's onw way to get them together. Nasty fucker...I hate people who won't take NO for an answer. Great chapter - loved the kissing, and the fact that Malik is getting a lot better with the rest. Way to go!
person z
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yet another two amazing chapters. Having just gone through a huge separation myself I know how much of an escape writing can be. From one angst author to another, feel free to get as dark as you need to. Write for yourself, not for us. We'll love anything you put out.
person Malik the Psycho
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Gasp*.........*Whine* X___X pleaassee....update...update! more! more! X_x;; Be a nice person and update soon please?Pretty please?With mindslaves ontop? *Sniffle*
person Lady Laran
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*whaps you over the head with a wombat* honestly!!! You're not a 'bitch authoress." You're a damn fine writer who is just going through a lot of rough times. So do NOT denegrate yourself!!! Got me? Otherwise, I'll sick Yami and Kura after your butt!

*huggles* Now, for the chapter. Well done, Malik is certainly coming out of his shell. The group is definitely a good help for him. I'm really looking forward to seeing the next installment.

person anubiset
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH god, i missed an update. I feel violated. Anyway, I needed a sabitical yesterday. But, I`m back and loving the last tow chapters. Malik looked so good in my mind I was drooling, not that I wasn`t drooling over Marik as, but I think he needs a little more attention. Here be lemon pie for missing you.
person shy
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*tugs shyly on the authoress's sleeve* Ever so very shyly sorry again....I....just wanted to shyly say that.....you should write novels *blushes for her boldness* I'm shyly sorry and I shyly hope that....that things get better for you and pretty shyly please....don't write this if...if it hurts too much. *runs away shyly before she can get hurt*
person ladywolf_Terri
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So good turned so wrong for poor Malik!! Can't wait to see what happens next!! Is Marik going to stay beside him? So will their relationship build from this? Okay..please update soon!! *huggles*
person haleygrace
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it tragic love. its wonderful please continue writting!
person UniqueQuietWolf
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Hello!,

I'm just a shy nobody that decided to say something. First off, I just have to say that your writing is some of the best I've ever read!! It's just so realistic, especially with the angst because things aren't all sunshine and rainbows in life and some authors tend to make their stories that way and I'm not saying that it's bad or anything cause those stories can be quite nice and cute but unfortunately our world really doesn't work that way. It's filled with much pain, sorrow, and dieing hopes and dreams-(mine are sort of cracking now or so it feels). I'm real sorry for your pain and agony you're going through now. If it makes you feel any better, you're not alone in having problems with life right now cause I'm having quite a few of my own now although I can tell that mine are much different than yours.Blah!!! Anywayzies, your stories are so awesome that almost every day after school I run home to my computer to see if you've got any new chapters up. They have drawn me like a moth to a flame and even if I was some how teleported to some deserted island out in the middle of nowhere in some shark infested waters, I'd swim through those seas, find some land that has some place with a computer, and drag my shark bitten bum to that compter and plop myself down in front of it just to read your wonderful writing all while bleeding to death. I wouldn't die cause then I wouldn't be able to read your kick-ass stuff and I'd be pissed! Keep going with your stories and don't ever give up on it no matter what anyone says because there's people like me who love it and it brightens up our day of hell! If peoplez have something bad to say about it, then ignore the poor pathetic dumb-asses. Chances are that they are just jelous because they don't have your superior writing skills, and it makes them feel better to make you feel horrible -(trust me, I know). It's either that or they've been smoking too much of something to the point where it has killed too many of their brain cells so they are so screwed up, they can't realize how great your stuff is, well, that's even if they have a brain ;). Now, even though I enjoy your angst (cause I really do!!), I still am hoping for those happy endings (in your story, "Going On", I am seriously dieing for Kage to get his ass kicked and Yami and Yugi finally get together), but do what ever floats your boat! I think how you are doing your Dark Roses story here is great! I really don't like it when there is all ready a developed relationship because I feel like I have missed out on the important stuff and also it's not that exiting cause you don't get to see how they get together. I certainly did't find your summary misleading and millions of miles from dissapointing. The people who did are just big bubble heads that couldn't find water even if they fell out of a boat. Well, I don't really talk to people so I hope none of the stuff I've said has offended you or anything. Just don't want you to stop the stories or anything cause I love them and wanted to inform you of just how good your work is and how much I apperciate it!!! I speak no jokes and tell no lies, your impressive, magnificent stories have caught my eyes.
I really hope your life gets better and your problems ease up!!!!!!!!!

Best Of Luck To You!!!