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for The Path of Vengeance

by zehlyah

person NubianQueen413
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, AND it has my favorite pairing (psychoshipping) I check this story everyday to see if you update. It's one of the best stories I've read in along time,(and I've read aLOT of stories)

Update soon!
person Whitney
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is....wow. Understatment!! This is extremely good, great writing style, and just great over around. I love it! I wasn't even gonna read this at first, but it caught my interest. I like dark storie, now I'm addicted! MORE!
person aspiker
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back!

A good transition chapter. I know they are difficult to write --> if they are not done carefully, they tend to be confusing. You did pretty well with it. 8-)

Bakura comes back, sadistic et. al. Can't wait to read that! 8-)
person Kugatsu
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad I found this fic again.


It was this fic that began me thinking of alternative pairings. I love this story and you've done it so well. I'm glad to see that you've updated because I was searching all over for this one.

I will definately be back. Thanks for writing so well.
person ralphiere
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was so NOT anti-climactic. A wonderful chapter!! Don't worry about not updating, I haven't updated anything but my Gravitation kisses... I'm such a slacker! I loved when you called Yami "King of Shame" you totally got a snicker out of me on that one! And I can't wait for Bakura's sadistic side!!! Bring it on and make me *squee*!!!

I'm so happy you're back - I hope you stay!
person Ravyn
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've been waiting so long for chapter 24! When is it going to come? This is such a great story, and you're KILLING me with suspense here, after leaving the end of the last chapter like that!
person Chikyu-Megami
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
firstly I have to say you have to be a talented writer to do the following, in the show tristian is my least favortive character, i can't help it i dislike him. yet the minute i read your story, It gets to the point i like him and want for him to get his "happy ending" and for that i congratulate you a thousand time over.

And of course this is just an awsome story in general. everytime you think its over something else comes along, the fact that the story revoles around yugi yet you keep switching to the other pairs/groups keeps it interesting and its beautifully writien.

all in all this story is amazing, and i may have double vision due to the fact i read all 23 chapters in a row but damn was it worth it.

i won't ask or tell you to update, but know that if you do i'll be a very happy camper.

~Chi~
person Ravyn
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing chapter! And Yami/Ryou...I'm loving it! *cheers* *dances* Keep up the AMAZING work! You've got me completely, totally, absolutely hooked!!!!!!!!
person ladywolf_Terri
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Wonderful Chapter!!!! I am loving Malik more and more!! I can't wait to see what happens next!
person MarikIshtar77
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey babe!! I finally got some time to catch up on my ficcage! (I'm pathetic...kick me. LOL)
I was cracking up the entire time I was reading this, even though I probably shouldn't have been laughing at some of the things I did. *snicker*
I must comment on a few things...

"aband-aid from a hairy body part" Uh...you mean there's suppose to be hair on more than just a person's head?

"bloody superhighway one would take on their way into hell." Okay, everybody sing it now, 'I'm on the highway to hell, oh the high way to hell!"

“Are you guys almost done in there? I have to take a piss.” “Oh that’s the stuff,” Malik, I love you. You really are the man. LOL


“God damn, Ryou, are you laying the eggs yourself in there or what?!?” Malik shouted from the living room.
“Be grateful he’s cooking at all, you arrogant shit,” Yami called back.
“Up yours, Pharaoh!” Good burn Yami, better burn Malik. wOOT! GO MALIK! still the man, oh yeah!


Malik bumped it with Mako Tsunami?!? Okay, he's not the man anymore. He's the merman. *snort*


Great chapter! I look forward to the next, huni!! *hugz*