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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like how this story is shifting gears and turning. The next chapter, where the reasons why Bakura took revenge on Yami in the 1st place will be most welcome
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh !!!
Please put like asteriks or something when teh scene changes...I'm having trouble finding where one scene ends and begin!
Poor Bakura! Will RYou help him? WIll he be able to see him? God this is just...man....
Please put like asteriks or something when teh scene changes...I'm having trouble finding where one scene ends and begin!
Poor Bakura! Will RYou help him? WIll he be able to see him? God this is just...man....
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good job, love the chapter.
Whew, so glad that Bakura's gonna be alright.
Well I can't wait for chapter 27.
Ja ne!
Whew, so glad that Bakura's gonna be alright.
Well I can't wait for chapter 27.
Ja ne!
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHA! Aww...poor Kura... Up shit creek without a paddle ...or a life vest ...or a friggin' boat! *snicker*
GREAT chapter!!! Sorry it took me so long to review. If it means anything, you made my fishing experience a whole fuck of A LOT better!!!! *giggle*
ZEHLYAH RAWKS!! wOOT!
GREAT chapter!!! Sorry it took me so long to review. If it means anything, you made my fishing experience a whole fuck of A LOT better!!!! *giggle*
ZEHLYAH RAWKS!! wOOT!
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great! It was believable as Bakura without actually coming and and saying it, voiced his concern for Marik. Then turn to become his old self and kill the guards.
Looking forward to the next installment...
Looking forward to the next installment...
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've been terribly remiss in reviewing, and I should be smacked. Looks good, and still an interesting read. Do continue.
DracOnyx
DracOnyx
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.:bangs head against brick wall:. Noooooo, Damn you Bakura! His dumb ass had to get himself caught.
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But you totally kick giant monkey ass! Good update. Can't wait to see what happens next
.:sigh:.
But you totally kick giant monkey ass! Good update. Can't wait to see what happens next
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous. I love it that you didn't shy away from the fact that Bakura will kill if necessary - it stayed true the character. ((And, oh, by the way, you call what Malik was wearing inconspicous? If I'd seen him dressed like that at an airport, I'd have screamed and told the pilot to check for bombs. LOL But maybe that's just me.)) Good job; I love it!
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow another update! I wasn't expecting one for atleast another month^^. I loved sadistic bakura in this one, he was a little truer to character in this chapter. Im looking forward to the next chapter!
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You totally made my night!! What a wonderful surprise to see this here, like a present waiting to be opened. It was a wonderful chapter - things are really moving along fast now, I can't wait to see what happens!!
Write bitch, write!!
heehee
Write bitch, write!!
heehee