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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, the Pharaoh was quite the PRICK, eh? (the blood and crunching bones were too fucking cool... love the descriptions!)
I laughed my ass off when Yugi said, "Get the fuck out..." LMFAO! GO YUGI!!
GREAT JOB, BABE! I eagerly await the next chapter!
I laughed my ass off when Yugi said, "Get the fuck out..." LMFAO! GO YUGI!!
GREAT JOB, BABE! I eagerly await the next chapter!
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I got to read Blackwater last night before bed, and I woke to this - could my life get any better!
I love how you did the flashback and told the tale, wonderful! Thank you!!
Su
I love how you did the flashback and told the tale, wonderful! Thank you!!
Su
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw...just.. AW!
I knew Atemu, I knew Yami was a rat bastard but...so Bakura just did to Yugi what Yami...
Damn this story is good.
I knew Atemu, I knew Yami was a rat bastard but...so Bakura just did to Yugi what Yami...
Damn this story is good.
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was a great chapter! I really like how its a little darker now, it makes it a bit more intersting to read^^
I hope you update soon.
I hope you update soon.
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...O_O...ummm..disturbing...great chapter..just very disturbing...wonder how Ryou is going to react?! Update soon please!!
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!!! GO YUGI!!!! WHOOOOOO HOOOOO!!! You tell that lying asshole sonofabitch who's alpha now!! ^_^ Oh my GOD!! Ilove you!! I love that you didn't make Yugi forgive him on the spot! YES!! PHAROH BASHING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! See how excited I am?! See? SEE?!! Oh, man!! I just can't WAIT for Ryou's reaction! And the way you tied everything together...SUPERB!! I say Bakura's punishment towards Yugi was NOTHING compared to what Ammon went through!! NOTHING AT ALL!! Bakura was being NICE!! Oh, and jsut so you know, Thief King=Akefia! WOOT! I say there be more Yami bashing, THAT ASSHOLE!! Man, this just makes the story that mush sweeter since we now truly understand what poor Bakie went through...STUPID PHAROH!!!! MORE SOON..PLEASE?!
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh this soo makes everything so much more Whoa! O_o Yes, for lack of a better word. You keep leaving me speechless. XD
I hope everything is alright in the end!
The wait was more than worth it. I totally adore your writing style and I do believe a lot of thought has gone into this whole story. I truly can't begin to tell you how much I think this rocks and I sincerely hope you update soon. I look forward to reading your work tremendously. :)
Take care!~ XD
I hope everything is alright in the end!
The wait was more than worth it. I totally adore your writing style and I do believe a lot of thought has gone into this whole story. I truly can't begin to tell you how much I think this rocks and I sincerely hope you update soon. I look forward to reading your work tremendously. :)
Take care!~ XD
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This kicked ass! It made me feel so bad for Bakura. You're the second person who made me hate Yami beyond belief...Congrats ^_^. I can't wait for your next chapter, you really are a talented author, keep it up!
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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAHHH please don't stop there!! I'm dying to read the rest!! Please don't torture your loyal readers!! :) Really wonderful writing. I like everything about this fic! Please please please continue it soon! I really want to read some more! XD
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh pleeeeease update soon!!!