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for The Path of Vengeance

by zehlyah

person YBakuraY.Malik fan
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay thanks for the email. Very good chapters and I am just starting to hate Atemu even more. I like the different point of views you added in both of Bakura's and Atemu's perspective. I really hope that Atemu doesn't like Ryou because of Bakura because Marik deserves Bakura. You are really talentive with writing. Excellent job! Can't wait until the next chapter.
person NubianQueen413
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww...damn you Atem. Well great chappie as usual, I can't wait to see what happens next!
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww... how touching... Bakura being sweet and Ryou creating chaos. *snicker*
Nice chapter, babe!
person Kugatsu
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was very short, but I felt much more emotion on Bakura's part and that was well done, perfectly characterizing Yami as the...more emotionless one. His telling was simply narrative and very objective as if he thought Yugi would take his side.

I am really enjoying this fic, I really am.
person Nancy
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* That chapter was so sad!!!!! I can understand why bakura would want revenge so badly now, yamis a real jerk!
person sglily
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is a phenomenal story. It is so well told and thought out. Obviously the premise is horrific. You have not skimmed over or taken any away from any of the more horrifying elements. The storytelling is quite incredible. Each of the characters are important and hold their own, being intrigual to the story at large. Bakura and Marik together are quite the couple. Malik is perfectly portrayed as an arrogant little bastard. In fact, I think he is my favorite int his story. Look forward to finding out what happens next!
person RaiL
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You absolutely ROCK for updating so fast! I'm really really grateful! I totally love your story. You ROOOCCCK XD.

Aahh Ryou banished people to the Shadow Realm. O_o Can he get 'em back? XD
person ladywolfTerri
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really great chapter, I just wonder how Atemu and Ryou are going to do now that the whole truth is out there? I hope another update comes soon!!
person Whitney
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WONDERFUL! I LOVE IT! OOh, I can't wait for more. Oor Yami better not be with RYou because he looks like Bakura....
person Ravyn
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was touching...very emotional. I can't believe Yugi took it that hard...I mean, I can, but wow. He kicked Yami out! Wow. AMAZING Chapter. *is imagining Yami on the street corner with a cup, begging*. Great job. Whatever happened to Kaiba?