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wow! I've just read this fic from start to finish for the sixth time hoping that by that time I arrive to that 31st chapter something new would have been added. Oh well guess not yet. But this fic is so well writen and thought out, that I can't just give up on it. I like the way that you've used all the Yugioh characters and made them believable to a fan of this fandom. Right now I'm looking forward/hoping to this story either continue or brought to a great ending it deserves. Till then.......

I love this story soooo much!!
I hope you update soon!
=)

Ah, yes! Another chapter. I especially loved the part where Yugi sits in the darkness, with Bakura. Nice bonding there, very human. Wonderful job on the chapter.

Please tell me when your thinking about updating!... I've re-read it all three times (not that I havn't enjoyed it mind you)... But I am hoping for a new chaper... to read and re-read... Honestly I don't mean to beg you, and try to push you into posting just anything... Although I doubt I would have that kind of persuasive power anyway ... 0.0;... But it /has/ been quite a while... Anywho just wanted to let you know that you are an amazing author and such... Please keep writing... at your own pase of course ^.^... And please keep my days a tad bit brighter with your awesome skills.

I hate to be illterate about this review, but I just want to know... ARe you ever going to update?... I... need the update. Or please someho get the word out if you've decided not to finish the story, so I can pretend to jump off a building and get on with me life... ^.^ thank you.

This is brilliant. All of the characters get a fair amount of, er, screen time, and they’re all IC. And I love the plot. It’s unpredictable, and at the same time it always seems as if each thing that happens was the only logical consequence... if that just made any sense.
Well, noting useful to say. Just that that story rocks^^
The fact I hate Yami helps too. Everybody hates him now! Yah! Yugi, Malik, Bakura and Marik can live happily ever after, Ryou can find someone nice to live with for once, and Yami can stay in some room under Otogi’s and Jonouchi’s bedroom and dust Otogi’s shop... *smiles dreamily*.
I hope you’ll update soon. That was a terrible moment to stop.

Yu-Gi-Oh is a pretty cool anime, but when I read your fan fic I cannot help but LOVE IT! It is soo passionate and well written that I feel like I am being pulled right into the story and experiencing everyone's emotions. Keep Doing what you're doing because its awesome! Can't wait till Chapter 31 and beyond!

I read your other chapters and can't believe that I actually have been behind to read. I hate my work and school scedule it is the cause of it. Another good chapter even though Joey is being an a@@! Tristain really seems to make himself scarace. Malik and Yugi are cute together. I wonder if Yugi will forgive Yami. Poor Marik lol for almost being like a servant to his lighter half. Finally it looks like Bakura has arrived and it willl probably take alot of convincing if he isn't going to try to kill Yugi or Malik for siding with the enemy. Im sure Marik will be happy when he finds out that Bakura has returned.. Please update. I want to be emailed when you update please.

It's good to see the story going forward. 8-) A powerful cliffy you've got here.....

I started reading this fic a long time ago, but I kind of took a long break from fanfiction... but I found it again two nights ago, and have been reading it constantly (between train trips to work on my cell phone, can you say geek?) You totally have my attention. Why the hell did I have to read it again when this was going to be the cliffhanger?! OMG, now I'm going to go insane until I find out what's going to happen when Yugi meets Bakura. Yugi must be insane. Then again, it's the author who made him do it... I love the way everyone in the story have things to connect them together. Why can't everyone just get along? :)