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March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Kaiba's in for it if Yami finds out he had anything to do with Bakura's plan. I don't think Kura has to worry about them hooking up . . . cause Kaiba will be just as dead as Bakura will if he gets caught. Definitely can't wait to see what's on the horizon for this.
DracOnyx
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March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! 8-) It will be interesting to see what happens to Seto/Tristian when Seto's part in this comes out...
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March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read this as soon as you posted, but I didn't get to review it until now - please forgive me!!
I love the scene where Mokuba loses it on Seto... that was very intense, and very powerful! This whole chapter was great, and I really look forward to more! When are Yami and Ryou going to get it on?? *smirk*
Su
I love the scene where Mokuba loses it on Seto... that was very intense, and very powerful! This whole chapter was great, and I really look forward to more! When are Yami and Ryou going to get it on?? *smirk*
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh an intense cliff hanger....is yami going to lose it? please update soon!!
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March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! Really great chapter!! I wonder how Yami is going to react now? I mean Kura is out of the country so that just screams he had someone help him who is still around...okay..enough babble from me!! Update soon please!!!
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March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O Oh, is somebody in for it. Yami's back on the warpath. Really cute chapter, thanks.
DracOnyx
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March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*looks back and forth* Okay I'm not a bad person here, BUT I WANT THAT BLACK MAGICIAN PLUSHIE!!!!! *tries to push Yugi's wheelchair into oncomming traffic* UNHAND ME OFFICER (gets dragged off) BLAST YOU YUGI!!! ;P j/k Such a unique story going on here, I love how the relationships and characters are building up! I can't believe Ryou dyed his hair black, he's gonna remind me of Mokuba now! LOL! But I couldn't stop laughing when I read Marik trying to gamble and then running out of the casino (too funny)!!! Keep up the good work~!
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March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent, well written story - and I read all sixteen chapters at one sitting. I really, REALLY hope that Bakura and Marik get what's coming to them - and I hope too that Yugi, Yami and Ryou all get together. I think that would really be the best solution for all involved... considering that Ryou and Yugi might just develop feelings that go beyond friends. Anyway, please update when you can. I want to see more!
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February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really great chapters!!! Loved them! But now I can't wait to find out what happens next!! as far as stories like that..I have a couple actually..anyways..keep up the great work!!
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February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hell yeah, I have a story like that . . . it's called Going On, and the damn thing has taken up more writing time than any other story I've ever written! Not to mention all the rewrites! So yeah, I know how you feel, and I love the story, so please keep up the good work.
I can't believe Ryou dyed his hair!
DracOnyx
I can't believe Ryou dyed his hair!
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