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for The Path of Vengeance

by zehlyah

person Schwartzwald
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE continue this is such a good fic omg! *drools all over*

*cough* please continue.*
person ladywolf_Terri
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVED the chapter!! Great job!!

Malik rocks in this fic!! Mwahahahahaha...actually..oddly enough considering he was only hanging around to get info for his dark..yet has helped Yugi the most out of anyone, really. XD

I can't wait to see what happens next so PLEASE update soon!!
person ralphiere
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you!

I woke up to this, and made the kids wait for breakfast while I read it! Of course I'm not reviewing until tonight, but I do what I can ^_~

I loved this chapter! Sending the boys to Disney! OMGWTF too funny! You're really letting the plot thicken, and now I'm on the edge of my seat! And oh how you dangle the next chapter!! You tease you!

Please update soon!

Su
person Silvershadowfire
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yugi has enough problems and his taking advice from the wrong person. Yami is being an asshole because he's angry, frustrated (in multiple ways) and unable to figure out this particular problem - how to help his aibou.

Yami SSF: Please?

SSF: No. You can't go to Disneyland and carve out Bakura's tripes.

Anyway, update when you can... I still have the feeling that this is going to so spin out of control - I can feel the angst building.
person aspiker
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! The set up for the next chapter promises a good juicy one. 8-)

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter...
person Ravyn
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A new chapter...this is getting better and better...AND BETTER! It's almolst like a drug, it's addicting! Keep up the amazing work! You've got me hooked.
person DracOnyx
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter. To be honest, I'm worried about what Malik is up to. Is he trying to add to Bakura's humiliation of Yugi and revenge against the Pharaoh by now getting Yugi to fall in love with him? I hope not . . . that would just be terribly wrong of him after everything Yugi's already been through. Can't wait for the next update.

DracOnyx
person Lady Laran
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay...this is the first time I'm going to do this to one of my two fave characters. *Picks up Yami and throws him into the wombat kennel* Drat the man!!! How could he do that to Yugi?!?!?! Malik is right..what Yami is doing is wrong..especially when he knows how Yugi feels! I think a confrontation between him and Yami might be appropriate..that or between Yami, Ryou, and Malik. Please update quickly!!!
person Elle-FaTe2x1
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All the questions at the end of the chapter are tempting to find out but my question is: where is the Yami/Ryou lemon *cry* I was so excited and looking forward to it! ^_~ great chapter though, gods I love this fic. It's got my fave paring! Yami/Ryou forever!!!
person sd
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great!