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for The Path of Vengeance

by zehlyah

person Ralphiere
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorta is right! You are absolutely gleeful that you left us all hanging!!

Another great chapter! OMG, wonderful lemon - absolutely delicious! I can't wait to see what happens!

Su
person DracOnyx
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dun dun dun . . . caught thief. Cripes, I'm not sure who's going to hurt him worse . . . Kaiba, or Yami. I HIGHLY doubt Yami's going to be able to hold back from doing SOMETHING to Bakura for what he did to Yugi. Can't wait to see the next chapter hun.

DracOnyx
person aspiker
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good cliffie!

It does raise some interesting questions though.... Will Marik be lost in America, will Bakura get out of the trunk, and whatever happened to Jou anyway? ;-) ;-)

The story's doing great!

Looking forward to the next chapter...
person Tenshi
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sugoi! So happy! Yami/Ryou lemon *dances around happily* loved this!!! Happy happy happy!!
person DracOnyx
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter ... while I agree with what Malik has told Yugi, Yugi's attitude won't help anything either in the times to come. But, I guess we'll see how it pans out. Great chapter.

DracOnyx
person Elle-FaTe2x1
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sugoi! Are Yugi and Malik goign to get together?
person Ravyn
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again, great chapter! I wasn't expecting you to update so soon, but I"m glad you did...I thought I would die during that long break. Oh, the suspense! *swoons* lol Anyway, GREAT job!!!
person Nancy
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hurruh a (sort of) double update! Im really enjoying your story, malik is very manipulative no? I look forward to your next update!
person Lady Laran
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*throws Yami back into the wombat kennel* You know, I kind of like the way Yugi is reacting to this. People deal with grief in several different ways. That Yugi has chosen to stand for himself and react without regressing to weaker behavior can be a good thing. This is a positive step if it's monitored carefully. He stood up for himself against Kaiba and despite what Yami and Ryou think, I truly believe that Yugi will be better for this! Way to go, Yugi! And for Malik, he just needs to slow down a wee bit and hopefully, he won't do anything FOR Bakura and Marik that will hurt Yugi.
person ralphiere
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*content sigh* YOU ROCK!!

Where should I start?! Good for you giving Yugi a set of balls, and Malik to teach him how to use them! I love that he's not all pussed out and is pushing the damned pharoah out! I was so happy when he told Kaiba off! And I still adore that you've sent them to Disney!! I loved the Matterhorn too!! You seem to be hinting for some coming excitement... bring it on!! Yay!!

Su