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for Tanoshii Junshinsa: Lovely Innocence

by Tatoa

person MiracleLight
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really think I am the first on of the first to review but I am here to tell you that was very good and I really want to read more so review and can you please bring in the other Hikaris and Yamis ..I think they will make the story more interesting just a thought you know. So anyway update and I will be sure to review
person aspiker
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This a good start for what promises to be a great story!
person Meriah (too lazy to log in)
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that was sexy. And you left me at a cliff hanger! Cruelty! ;_; Update soon, please? ^^
person Kita
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I like... o-o I think you're improving... x3