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for Tanoshii Junshinsa: Lovely Innocence

by Tatoa

person Rachel Dracon
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, interesting story. I wanna know why Bakura isn't suicidal if he's been diagnosed as it. And damn, stupid nurses... I like this a lot, please update it soon!
person SillyBleeder
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it...it's just romantic enough with a serious tint. Keep it up!! ^_^ WOOT for all RyouxBakura lovers!
person zehlyah
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woohoo! excellent so far! Bakura and Marik know each other?? Can't wait to find out how....
person Hikari Rioki
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good story so far. Please write more soon. It's really good; I love it. Keep writing!
person ladywolf_Terri
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm reviewing..I want more!! This story seems to have a lot of potential..I can't wait to see where you go with it. Update soon!
person Kita
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yesh, you are lovable. x3 And you stole my "x3" face. xD Nice change compared to the really horribly written stories I've been coming across all day. @.@;;
person Lady Laran
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm..interesting concept and the writing style is fairly clean. I like it when the writer gets bogged down with excessive description, allowing the story to flow easily. I'm going to follow this one. Please update soon!
person Camille
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting! Keep on writing this! I want to see what happens next.
person Lady Laran
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, you know you're out of it when you mess up like that...lol..what I meant to say was that I liked it when a writer DOESN'T get bogged down with details. lol...sorry...anyway, great job..again..and hope to see more from you soon.
person DracOnyx
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A lovely start so far. Please do continue.

DracOnyx