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for Tanoshii Junshinsa: Lovely Innocence

by Tatoa

person Muffin
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it , I love it , give more of it and yes I'm on a sugar high please disregaurd my idiocy. Thanx
person Zoeybell
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thanks for saying that. I was starting to think you abandoned it. Update as soon as possible please. Ja-ne!
person Jewelcryer
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes u r a bastard but i love you for it. i love your lemon. please hurry and update :)
person JYue
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my! I love this fic! And that's the reason why I'm here: you HAVE to continue! Oh, please, pretty please!!
I really liked it, and I love the pairing... I don't really have much of comments or suggestions...
Oh, well! Hope you update soon!

JYue.
person person
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, you're mean. You have to write more soon! The suspence is killing me.
person kuro kaze
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
see told u i would read the other one ^,^ and now i have. i feel like a parrot repeating the same things over and over again and again...but i really do like ur work. shameless ne? ano, you really do need someone reading these over for you, as others have pointed out. great writing ur first true fanfic, even though it is AU, heh i like it better that way anyway. and ur smart to take it one step at a time. cant wait for more on all of your stories, and on an assumed non-AU fanfic. good luck and keep up the marvelous work! ^,^
person Ryzel
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you are sooooo lucky! wish i had a boyfriend/girlfriend better yet i wish i was male lol i swear in my next life ill be reincarnated as a male! lol anyways hurry with the next chapter, but how dumb can you make ryou be? he IS a doctor so he should atLEAST know the symtoms lol hell even i do and im no doctor lol anyways im ganna go kay? Im waiting for my koi to come on *she hasnt desided if shes bi or not so where kinda togehter kinda not o-_-o i hate being impatient lol*
person Silver thorns
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely fantastic. Puntuation's not the best but the story line, style of writing, creativity is great and i thoroughly enjoyed it.
person Alysia
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story keep going!:)
person ladywolf_Terri
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gah!! Cliffie!! Update soon PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^