rate_review Reviews

Perfect. Amazing. ; D i love it.

Woah..that was very nice. I especially like the memories parts. Of course, dont get me wrong, I like the present too. ;) I love Seth/Yami and Seto/Yami. Is this done? or is there another chapter?

I thought that this was one of the sweetest stories that I have read about this pairing. You did a wonderful job on it. The characters seemed a bit OC, but that's okay cause you made it fit perfectly. Please keep writing!

As always, you have created a masterpiece that every prideshipping fan should read. I first discovered you on mm.org, and later I feasted my eyes on the treasures you created on ff.net. I am extremely pleased to see that you have also ventured onto aff.net. I am a huge fan of the YamiXSeto pairing, and reading your work has helped me to become that way. I thank you a thousand times over for contributing to the menagerie of Yu-Gi-Oh yaoi stories and blessing us readers with your extraordinary talent. Your imagination, originality, and beautiful writing style combined with your wondrous descriptions make you one of the best fan fiction writers that can be found. Thank you for writing this heart-warming story. I hope to see more from you in the future.

Wow! That was really well written! I enjoyed every chapter, and I'm so glad I read this story! I hope to see more from you!

i like the way you've combined the "present" and "past" elements of the storyline - it's less cliche and obvious than some i've read... i also like the yami/kaiba pairing, but (and you don't have to take this on board), why is yami CRYING so much?!?!?!? i didn't pick him as the type! then again, i know how fun wrting slightly OOC is... take care, have fun writing more!

Pharaoh in love . . . absolutely hysterical! loved the chapter hun : )

DracOnyx

Yay!!! I can't wait to see your next chappy!

Yugi should have used more than a jacket *grumbles* But at least the jackass apologized. Nice chapter, btw. Can't wait to see more.

DracOnyx

I love this story. The way Yami's past is intermingling with his present, the way you've crafted the nature of the relationships after he's gotten his own body. I've read many fics where Yami is perfectly adjusted with perfect relationships, and that doesn't fit. I think the way you've written Seto, both in the past and present, is spectacular.

Can't wait to read more.