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for Unforgiven

by AtheneChan

person Lai
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I never thought you'd be back... poor Honda. What next? =3
person Terra
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Have I ever told you, I do so HATE cliffhangers? (sigh) and I just got a manicure. WOnderful job, I did so enjoy it.
person Lai
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thought I'd go ahead and finish... I'm really enjoying it so far... Update soon... Please? =3
person Terra
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice twist.
person Terra
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I missed a few but I'm caught up now. I loved those chapters. Just one request, type faster, LOL. Keep it up.
person neptuna
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
I like your story..there is just one problem:
As a german girl I really hate to read the german parts..it's just so..well..not german.I know it's never easy to learn a language and I don't mean to insult you. Perhaps you should consider to let somebody else translate what you want to write or you should forget it, because it just doesn`t help the story,if the the "German" doesn't speak german at all.
person Terra
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you're spoiling me, 2 in a row. Spoil away! I've had vacations like that, get back and start going, sometimes you need a vacation from your vacation. Update soon.
person Tifter
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what a great way to start off!

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