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for Alone?

by ladywolfTerri

person Ralphiere
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this! OMG...you're Bakura is just so hot! Continue! Continue! Please Continue!

person MarikIshtar77
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so cute! It made me hungry for 'sketti, so I had to go throw some on the stove. *snicker* I'm such a geek.
Funny you mentioned hot cocoa.....if I ever get my ass in gear and post the next ch. of Hellraisers II, you'll see what I mean. I know you'll laugh.....
I hope Yugi was using the Herbal Essences spray-in stuff, it smells almost edible! (and only $3 a bottle! WOOT! LOL)
Okay, so the power is out now. They gonna tell ghost stories my candle light? Hide n' Seek? (its fun playing that in the dark! LOL) *OR* try something....shall I say......citrusy? *grin*
Great job!!!!!!!
person maggiemay
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting start. Please continue, It isn't my normal pairings, but I am enjoying it. Thank you.
person ChibiMisu
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww!! ^^ Bakura and Yugi pairing!! SO CUTE!! hee hee hee!! I love the story!!! Please update soon!! I wanna see what happens!! Great story! Keep up the good work! ^_^v
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh. wow. i'm loving this so far. Is this going to be a kuraxyugi story? i absolutely adore that pairing! you hardly see it around though :(( anyway, nice work. very much looking foward to the next chapter.
person Silvershadowfire
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, to be perfectly honest I usually avoid these kind of 'Yami no Yugi is a fucking bastard and abandons his hikari' things like the plague, but this one is starting out pretty good. Please keep going!
person Ladynight
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Great story so far...usually i'm a purist with pairings but i kept reading the story and found that i really did like how it was going. Can't wait for the next installment!
person DracOnyx
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Looks positively great. Keep up the good work hun : )

DracOnyx
person kitty
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a CUTE stroy with Yugi and Bakura. Please write more!
person Lady Laran
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG...you have to update this soon! Absolutely wonderful story idea. I would make the paragraphs smaller though for easier reading, but it could've been a formatting error. However, despite that, I was disappointed to find that it was over! lol...update quickly!!!! :-)