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for Alone?

by ladywolfTerri

person catti-dono
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lemon, ladywolf, lemon....I am fairly new to Yu-Gi-Oh...being a Ruroni Kenshin addict...Im finding Yugi to be quite entertaining and enjoyable reading....but I also find that your writing style is quite nice...am wondering if you are a little older than most? This is quite a good story...updates are greatly appreciated to this newbie...catti
person maggiemay
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh...nice chapter. I can hardly wait for the inevitable Yami/Yugi/Kura clash...MM
person zehlyah
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god I laughed myself silly through these two chapters! I can't wait to read more!!!!

Bakura's take on "classic" films had me rolling!

Update soon!!!!!!!!!!
person Iris
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And the crowd chants LEMON Lemon lemon ... L-E-M-O-N!!!!
person Iris
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Seriously though i love how sweet you make the love scenes and I totally agree its a nice change of pace to see Bakara hangin with the hikaris, your writin seems so real especially how everyone is suspicious people so rarely give others a fightin chance (give Bakara/ Yugi love a chance evil grandpa!grrr)! Your story is sooo gooood can't wait for an update. Bouncein around hyper update update update pretty pleasse(looke at da puppy eyes).
person Wicabeth
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lemon! Oh please, lemon! XDD

I think I was laughing just as hard as Bakura in this chapter.
person aspiker
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lemon...interruption....lemon....interruption..... hard choice.... ;-)
person DracOnyx
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LEMON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great chapter, sis! Good fight scene, and all of Kura's comments were dead on! I want more!!!!!

Drac and Kura
person Rachel Dracon
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To lemon! Definitely to lemon! Nice, that was cute, funny chapter, it's nice to see Bakura hanging out with all the hikaris, such a change from what you usually read. And 'maybe some other time' sent me laughing so hard my roomie came over to ask what was funny (and I laugh at shit enough that she usually doesn't ask). Anyway, it was great, can't wait for MORE! ^.^
person Kugatsu
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! you horrible teaser!!!!