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NO!!!!!!!!! POOR RYOU!!! *fighting back tears* NO!!! pleasepleasepleaseplease update soon!!

I DEMAND YOU NOT KILL RYOU!
HE CANT DIE IF ANYTHING KURO SHOULD DIE!!!!
Have Kura Bring him back to life please!

aww Yugi, Yami leave them hanging

RD: grr if that bastard hurts ryou hes dead i tell you DEAD ill mark his grave with his inscription he will DIE if he lays a hand of harm on ryou i swear he will there all made of thousan times more stronger stuff then that i know we know and THEY KNOW IT ok well gtg now pls pls PLS keep up the great work and update soon i must read more heheh gtg now JA NE ^_______^

I like it I wants more ^.^

Great chapter!! But I have this horrid feeling Ryou ends up hurt..>.<...Anyways..Please update soon!!!

Wow, this is so awesome! I really like it. It's pretty good, better than I thought it would be. I'm glad I took the time to read it. Update, k?

I KNEW IT!!! MUAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

RD: pah pls like anyone could be of any threat to bakura and Marik ya know seto should remind those two of who they are the most natorious villains to ever set foot on earth Bakura i mean for god sakes he WALTSED right into the throne room completly decked out in jewls and gold and carrying the corpse of the former pharaoh that takes guts above and beyond normal standards and marik what did he say on the blimp at Battle City "lets check the damage and cause some more" tristan couldnt have put it more better hes pshycotic and very powerful hmm now yami and yugi have there shop maybe bakura should become a cop as the saying always goes in order to catch and or beat a thief on must think like a thief and who better to do that then the most natorious thief in the world and ryou he should put his whole experience out on the streets into an autobiography show the world that he was ashamed of his life and wanted to change it and did but didnt do it on his own hehe and yami dont get me wrong ur monsters still love you but they know that u can do better for ur life then were it was the DM knows that the DMG knows that and i know that you bothe saved the world from countless villains enemies and total nutcases yet ur telling me that u cant win against the pain of losing someone that just dosnt seem even remotely right ur bothe far stronger then that ya know i was thinking maybe you should merge with kaiba corp that way he can put his products into the game shop and let the life that once shined in that builing burt through like no other hehe and maybe even make it bigger well its ur story so u do what u want author but lets get this up and running hehe i want to see them back in tip top shape again all of them well gtg now pls keep up the great work and udate soon gtg now JA NE ^__^

Yay!!..You know..until now I never rooted for Kaiba to win! XD..Great job! I can't wait for the next update so I hope it is soon!!!