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for Return to the Light

by hatochiisai

person aspiker
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This has been a great story. 8-) I look forward to any sequel you decide to write for it. I know it will be a good one. 8-)
person Jessica
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Really rooted for Ryou! I would love to see a sequel to wrap up everything a little more...like Seto/Joey's relationship and why it faltered and the other couples' lives away from crime...I'd love to see it all! Great job and keep up the good work!
person Hikari Rioki-chan
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O
You better do a sequal! I wanna see how everything turns out.
person ShadowofLight
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh thank god! *sighs in relief* i was worried about ryou. hmm the end was kinda quick but at least everyone is abck on rack. u actually had me running scared but i do like this fic ^^
person Red Dragon Of Egypt
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RD: yay hehe and thanks Hato for choosing my idea for ryou i was a bit at a loss at what to have bakura do but i really thought that ryou writing a story about his life on the streets would really have the whole hting sink in far more deeply then any others hehe but i gotta ask who was the dumbass that taught yugi how to use shadow magic i bet there kicking themselves in the heads for that one hehe now airbrush painting hmm i never pictured bakura as an artist but you never can truly tell were a persons strong suits lie well keep up the great work hato and update soon hehe hopefully things will get better from here on out gtg now JA NE ^__^
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL!!! *shakes head* bakura doesn't stand a chance in hell against those two. *snickers* i love how everything is going now. i especially loved the cuteness of the yamis comforting ryou. (wish i was that lucky) anyway, lovely work as usual. looking foward to your next update. now, to go read Touch The Stars. ^__^
person ladywolf_Terri
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*LMAO*..Leave it to Kura to piss those two off!! XD

Hurry and update!! I can't wait!! Really..I can't!!!! XD
person ShadowofLight
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what can i say? still, i won't forgive them for even thinking of taking those goddamn jobs. sorry i nearly was in a accident and i have a tension headache. bye but can't wait for hte next chapter. question, what's hte pairings?
person Diana
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blinks and realizes there is a world beyond the computer screen* WOW!!!!! That was incredibly well written! I look forward to reading more by you!!!!!
person Hikari Rioki
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was great! Awesome!