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for Return to the Light

by hatochiisai

person Jenivi7
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, the ending was so sweet :D this story was awesome and there were a couple humorous parts that had me cracking up. so much so my husband asked me if i was gonna be alright! I had to answer no :p oh, and poor ryou but he is so very easy to torture.
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! OOOOOo0o0o0o sequel sequel PLZ!!!!!
person smalvina
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very nice
person YaoiOtaku
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That's really good!!! I think that you outta do a sequel! Let know have they are doing!!
^_^
person Havoc Tellenoi
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved this story. I hope to see a sequel! it rocked. It was sad adn funny and great and realistic and just plain fun at some points. more would be appreciated and loved.
person Saka
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok it’s been decided between me ‘n my friends...we’re all readin this fic together. There were three votes that Seto should let Yami ‘n Yugi keep dancing...they’re too hot otherwise...*drools*

‘N as long as ‘Kura ‘n Ryou come over here....they can continue. Or so say four votes (eight if we had counted each raised hand).

But Marik ‘n Malik- yeah they gotta do somethin else. Drugs are really bad, ‘n so is stealin...We can take care of Marik ‘n Malik, I’m sure there’s a job somewhere around here that we can find for them...*sneaky eyes, sadistic grin* They may not be safe with the four of us. *smirk widens*

Ok ok...we’ll give you a true review. This was an amazing fic- ya have 4 votes on that- ‘n we all loved it. Thank you Kaiba for getting our boys back! *mutters* Even if they were totally hot before. As always great job! 'N we all are glad that Ryou's ok...had us scared for a sec! ^_~

Also sequel would be awesome- unless you've already done it. In that case I'll hopefully be findin it sometime. but if ya haven't done a sequel- ya gotta!!

Your fan!!

~IceAngel~
('n
Shadow Cat, Kela, Dea)
person ruri_star
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved this story! i wished you would up date your other storys! thinks for writeing because of you i have something to do!!!
person Shadow Mistress
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, I loved the ending and the story! It's such an alluring story, that I can't beleive it's over, lol. Very well written. And of course the Seto/Yami lemon was just as delicious as it always is! ^_^ ANd I'm so glad Ryou's alright! *jumps for joy* Yeah, the tendency to torture our fav character is always there, heh heh heh. Sequel, whee, I would love to see one! Maybe you can elaborate a little abt. Kaiba and Jou's relationship in it.
person Ruri_star
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute! i like!
person UrufuChikara aka VioletFlame
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww.....Squee! ^^ I've read the whole thing, 'tis awesome^^. And I LOVED the SetoxYami....thing. And yes, you do seem to have a problem with tormenting, torturing, and generally causing great misery to your favorite character(as well as mine^^). And... I never knew Bakura was airbrush artist. Though I guess it fits him. And now that Ryou's a novelist, I love him even more^^. I love to write. Great story! *huggles*