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NOOOOOOOOOOOO YUGI!!!!!!! god damn yami & seto. keep writing

Pleas tell me you are going to finish this...or are taking a break until you get a chance to finish...because I want to know how this'll turn out! And their hasn't been any insight to Seto/Jou's relationship! When are the yamis gonna beat on Seto's ass?! I need to know! Thank you.

Woohoo!! Go Grandpa!!! I'm so glad he got in a punch! I love how you're handling everyone's reaction to Yami doing that horrible thing to Yugi...And great intro for Malik and Marik;) I hope Yugi is ok:( Poor kid:( Update soon! I love this fic!

awsome story!^.^loves it

Whoa! That was totally intense! Nice work!
Call me a bitch, but I think Yami's getting what he deserves. He and Seto could've at least locked the friggin' door, yunno? Those two little skanks...hrrrr..
Poor Yuugi though...hope he's okay!
I'm looking forward to your next update! If you could possibly email me when you do, I'd appreciate it. I don't always have time to check the webpage, and I don't want to miss the next chapter!

RD: huh GOD DAMIT YAMI WHY DID U DO THAT TO HIM grrr *turns into her human form with black leather jacket pants and boots as well as a blood red silk shirt with blood red highlights in it then she grabs her whips launches them then uses them to send yami flying into a wall then she starts whipping him till hes riddled with lashes from head to toe then she brings out her most darkest necromancy magic and starts torturing him till he finally snaps and goes insane then she leaves him there with pain and illness in his body mind and soul keeping him company till hes driven to become pure hate*hmm maybe i went too far on that one any ways update soon SNB but do know this if u pull a stunt like that again with yugi it will not be pretty well it wont be pretty for yami and u might find urself minus on character in ur story is all cuz if thers one thing i cant stand its yugi comiting suicide cuz of these kind of things grr YAMI U TWO TIMING SOB IF I CATCH WITHIN A FOOT NEAR YUGI AGAIN I SWEAR ILL KILL YOU grrr well gtg now SNB keep up the great work and dont worry yes though u did write yugi comitting suicide it wasnt because of you more of yami instead who is really starting to piss me off again well gtg now JA NE ^__^

omg i love this story so far! you got to keep riting? r you goin to have a lemon at the end thouhg???????-_-
g2g
bye
shelly


ps KEEP RITING

gaaaah .....

thanks for explaining for Jou but now ..... GAAAAAAH !!!!

just do one thing for me .... make me the nurse, it will remove that horrible pain in my chest for trying to kill yugi.

and thank you !!! I soo wanted a fics with a bastard Yami !! and where is Seto ?

Out of curiosity, why is Yami taking all the shit? Not that I blame Yugi's friends...I just thought that Seto would be catching some of the fallout as well.

Now, Yami is going to be in SO much shit...I don't know how this is going to be EVER resolved... of course, with that title...

I loved the longer chapter. Keep up the good work. I`m with Marik on this one. When do they get to come in and beat them up as well. I`d love that. *starry eyes*