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for The Moon Over Egypt

by Firewing

person Pegasus James
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Definitely, this is very well-written. You did Crouquet's devotion, his character all together was perfect. I believe this would have happened, had it happened at all. Update soon, I'm looking forward to it.
person subjunctivity
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. I love that pairing and you really did a good job with it.
The "Chistopher Croquet" part always bothers me, though. However, it has nothing to do with your fiction.
I'll recommend this!
person Yamima
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yamimi: Well written Nice job
Yami Minature: (spits up) WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT, PEGASUS SUCKS!
Yamimi: BE QUIET OR POLLY POCKET GET'S A NEW ROOM MATE!..........Oh sorry! (Sweat drop)
Update soon
person gaijin-chan
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It works. I'm impressed.