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by Amarin

person Annie Maye
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha, that was wonderful. I love a good clever conversation. Well-crafted. not many writers can pull off using the word 'zeal' in a sentence without it sounding like a joke.
And Duke, such an under-written character. Go you for having him here.
person JadedSoul
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! Both characters were written believably, and the peice flowed nicely. Good job!
person ceacuslupa
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue this, be a shame if you didn't. Email me when you write the next chapter.

Looking forward to next time.
Later,
Lupa
person Yoko Sesshoumaru
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such a cool story! I would have never thought of Kaiba and Duke together! Kaiba is my favorite character and him and Duke together is awesome!

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