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for Sleepwalk Dance

by SuT

person aspiker
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good pairing and lemon! 8-)
person MarikIshtar77
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was fucking awesome! I loved it totally!!! Fucking Marik, wacking Honda over the head with a dildo. I can totally picture that. *evil giggle* You did a wonderful job with these two, great work! I never woulda been able to pull it off, so I bow to you. Did I see that right? Ryou and Yami next? Oooh, that's gonna be hot one! WOOT!!!
person DracOnyx
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! and it was very believable. I can't wait to see Yami and Ryou . . . why do I have this nagging suspiscion that Yami will be able to make Ryou noisy? that would be interesting . . .

DracOnyx
person ladywolf_Terri
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!..Damn..Marik would be fun!!!..okay..umm..keep up the wonderful work!!..I need more!!!!
person Anon
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that this was very well written and a delight to read. It has second read potential, and by my standards that means that this is an exceptional story. I can't wait to see the next chapters!
person Kupo
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the concept in this story. Its really good!
person Kupo
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That lemon was great. But u didn't tell us who's next! update asap
person MarikIshtar77
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was totally WOW. I don't even know where to start! Those two were just so hot together! GREAT JOB! I know I'll have a good dream tonight for sure now. Thank you!!
person Naria
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!! BISHIE SMUTFEST!! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!! ^_^ I likey VERY much!! Although, I think it would have been very pretty to see the fair haired yamis fooking the fair haired lights!! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! BakuraxMalik and MarikxRyou...mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm....tasty!! Although Bakura and Yug is surprisingly sexy!! MORE SMUT!! NOW!!!!
person Deb
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe niiice ^_^
Bakura/Yugi stuff is great!
Excellent chapter huni!
Cant wait to read more!
I wonder who the next couple shall be....
Update soon!
Luv
Deb xx