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for Yami hawk

by Niffty24

person cookie
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was so funny!!! i loved it please keep writing more to it!!!!
person Justajester
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh...beastly.

It's funny, coz it's true XD

Update!
person dark_sides_rule
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Where's the rest of it!?!?!!
person SAMANTHAFOXYLADY
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg, this is super funny, XD i hope u update quicky quicky
person Hentai Kriby Dragon
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*is dead from laughing so hard and so much at this funny as/more than hell fic* X.X XD
person LadyRuby
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That story was funny as HELL! I laughed so hard I cried! I loved it! Please, please, PLEASE write more soon!
person kyra
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is histarical i love it is the paragraph ur cousin wrote the scene in mcdonalds? anyways keep up the good work.
kyra
person Keket
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome and uber funny! Heh I'm just like Marik...chasing squirles that is. They don't like me too much. Heh heh heh...anyway...udpate soon please!
person atery
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o.o intersting
person COMEDY FAN
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*laughs insanely*.......*still laughing*..ok..ok ..let me ....catchmy...*laughs harder* *falls off of computer chair* I LOVED It! It was so hilarious. poor, poor yami!