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for Surrender

by Ykarzel

person Gigi
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^ Your fic was delicious to say the least! I've been drowning in a lot of heavy hearted fics lately, but yours was so light hearted it picked me right up! It was fun to imagine all the guys sitting aroung having coffee like College students^^. I am anxiously awaiting the last piece and please don't ever stop writing!!

(P.S. I won't ever smoke, it's such a bad habit that only fictional charachters should do it^^)
person Felidae
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Smooches Ykarzel)
That was so funny and sweet!^^ Looks like our gang grew up to be some real pervs, ne? (lol)
I was so happy you made Jou seme-ok, I can fully relate to Seto's addiction for the blond, he's just...*me-owr*!
But the way Seto acted around him was so..cute. Yes, cute. There is no other way to say it. And I can't wait for the next story!
Godd job! 0 =
person JadedSoul
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Jou is so very sexy when he is in control, and I really like the way you've made Seto uke but kept him from becoming all weak and girly as is too often the case. Great job, and I can't wait for the next one. ~Jade
person Akuchan
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was great!!! Two stories from you in one month what a great treat. I really like the dynamics of their relationship, and Seto getting taken is hot. Hope the next part is out soon.
Akuchan