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February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow great fic! I loved the lemon! Awesome story1 Funny as well!
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOWOWOWOWOWOW....*dies*
*revives to write rest of review* Yikes that was hotttt. And the playful sexual banter was funny. Not too many stories make me laugh out loud when i read them but this one did.
Silvertales fav quote - "I’ll fade the line between bliss and reality, take you between them until you don’t care which is which, then push you off so hard you won’t know which side you landed on."
Ahhhhhhhh! *dies again*
*revives to write rest of review* Yikes that was hotttt. And the playful sexual banter was funny. Not too many stories make me laugh out loud when i read them but this one did.
Silvertales fav quote - "I’ll fade the line between bliss and reality, take you between them until you don’t care which is which, then push you off so hard you won’t know which side you landed on."
Ahhhhhhhh! *dies again*
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jou's so... sexy... especially what he was saying, I loved that!
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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww :) Nice to know Seto can let someone else take control for a change...
Seto as uke... Nice :D
*Wanders off, happy that she read your fic*
Seto as uke... Nice :D
*Wanders off, happy that she read your fic*
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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, forgot to say yes, smoking should only be done by fictional characters, but by god it can be hot when used properly (ie: not often)
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! Me likee!!! Can't wait to go read the thrid one now... ^^
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March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this one even better than succumb, for various reasons:
- Jou's rubbing and kicking under the restaurant table
- Seto's question if he could wait in the car
- Yugi's reaction when he noticed them
- Bakura's "It speaks!"
- the kiss in front of everyone (and everyone's reaction to it)
- Seto's surprise at the comment about Jou being prude, and Seto's reaction to it
- and of course the lemon (especially Jou's sexy talking) and the rose
- Jou's rubbing and kicking under the restaurant table
- Seto's question if he could wait in the car
- Yugi's reaction when he noticed them
- Bakura's "It speaks!"
- the kiss in front of everyone (and everyone's reaction to it)
- Seto's surprise at the comment about Jou being prude, and Seto's reaction to it
- and of course the lemon (especially Jou's sexy talking) and the rose
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AH-HA! A sequel! I love these stories! Can't wait for the next one!
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*uses fire extinguisher on monitor* Lordy, you did good with that lemon. Oh hell, the whole thing was fantastic! I love the interaction between Seto and Jou in this. The way you wrote the gang... damn, good work!
Can't wait for Submit. Nice disclaimer at the end. *laughs* I really liked that.
Kat
Can't wait for Submit. Nice disclaimer at the end. *laughs* I really liked that.
Kat
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gods, your writing is hot! I've loved it ever since Beachin' Trip and Ice and now Sand Lover and this series has me hooked even more. Whoo; I'm still fanning myself after that lemon! Just two questions; will Seme Seto finally emerge in the last part of this (not that I'm complaining if he doesn't 'cause your Seme Jou is totally hot), and will you be adding to school week any time soon? **gives puppy eyes, pushes review button, and goes to wait for answer as patiently as she can** :P