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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Was this translated? I mean it would have been good but the english was wrong.... i spent the whole story noticing the bad english rather than enjoying the lemon! You need to get yourself a beta reader to correct your spelling and grammar.
It was a good story... it just was badly written
It was a good story... it just was badly written
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April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Had to come back and read it again it's so sweet
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April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm such an id, I forgot to review this, It's soooo cute,
Mim couldn't right anything this sweet with out a side
of filth to go on the side. And I wonder what happened to
oni, she never finished 'the Bet'.
Mim couldn't right anything this sweet with out a side
of filth to go on the side. And I wonder what happened to
oni, she never finished 'the Bet'.
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like this, i like this, wow great ,well done.
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January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm with Gaia...Me Like It. Me Like It
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January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet I love it!