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I really liked your plot!! I wish you had drawn out the whole slave to Baku thing a tad longer. LOL Then let Baku look at him in that way.
How you did it went well also. I loved the three of them and it only seemed natural you would introduce Marik as well.

Thank you for writing this!!!

Oh! Theres more isnt there? Please say your writing more!?
Its a great fic! Y'know.. except for all the ebil raping and ..stuff. But eh, whatever. lol. Its still great.
Poor Bakura! I dont want to pitty him but.. poor fellow, thinking hes creating the crowd. Somehow i cant see Ryou letting Bakura leave their trio. It was, after all,
Bakura who he asked to make him forget being 'raped' by Marik ne?

Im interested to find out what happens!
Write more soon! You know you want to..

OH MY GOD!! MORE!! NEED MORE!! I'm gonna commit suicide if another chappie isn't posted!! >o< Holy crap! Poor Marik! He can't even kill himself! I know I'd go crazy if I didn't even have that luxury!! Poor angry man, he definietly needs some white-haired bishie lovin!^___^ And he needs to stop being such and ASSHOLE!! I hate hime, but I feel so sorry for him at the same time! ARGH!! I am addicted, so don't stop supplyin!!

.__. It just, made me cry. 'Cause I'm a soft bitch who has waaaay too many issues. It was sad, though. Lots of things are. Duh. But, it was. Marik seemed to be in his own depressing, insane worl as he pulled the trigger. I wish he would have aimed for... maybe an arm, or an area that would cause little damage.

Though, I do have hopes that he will somehow wake up. oo; Eh. Malik blamed himself. Woo. Boo hoo. Poor little man.

I would do the same. S'like when my gramma died. I blamed myself for never saying godbye, and maybe if I had been at the house with her, she would never have died. >.>

o-o; Poor 'Kura, feeling like a third wheel. I want my gramma...

._.; Heh. It was an interesting, and gloomy story. Beautiful job.

~Daaku. ;-;

DONT LET THIS BE THE END !!!
Its needs a sequel or more chapters XD.

This is so damn cool. I've always been sympathetic for Marik in fics that start like this one did, so I love what you're doing with this one. You rule.

Oh man...I'm crying for Marik! IT'S SO SAD!! All he wants is love and all he gets is NOTHING!! EVEN HIS PRETTY BIKE!! AAGH!! I need to know what happens next because I can't stop thinking about Marik! Now he's blind and broken and it literally breaks my heart! I WNAT A MAN ORGY!! They can fix Marik! THEY CAN AND THEY WILL, DAMMIT!! They can cure his twisted ways and make him a little less crazy! WOOT! Yeah...MORE SOON!!

wow....poor guy. you can't help but pity him. i mean, he seems so....lost. how long is he gonn have to live like that?

nooooooooooooooo
poor marik
he cant b blind *sniff sniff*
dat was soo depressing
update soon

YOU MUST CONTINUE YOU JUST MUST!!!!!!