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by Yamima

person Sarah Costa
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter. I can't wait to see the next one. Please update soon. Ja ne
person Red Dragon Of Egypt
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RD: huh i guess some ppl never learn do they Yamimi oh and before i begin i must warn you all im extreamly pissed right now and when i get pissed i get very nasty so if you have sensitive stomachs to serious gore i reccomend you NOT read my review i repeat DO NOT read my review if you are sensitive to nasty gore action thank you *charges at ushio panic and seto rams them into the wall then chains them down beats the shit out of them breaking jaws and giving them plenty of scars and bruises then she pulls out twenty machine guns and fires them point blank into there mouths till there popping ouf of there ear and eyes and everywhere then she pumps them full of one hundred % raw acid then shove gasoline and vodka down there throats and drenches them in it then lights them up and watches them burst into mine atomic mushroom cloud form flames then goes after the entire Blue Eyes gang and tears every single last one of them to shreds dumps them into the warehouse she left there leader barracades the entrances and windows with 50k thick solid steal with a hard diamond coat and an inner cachime metal core to make it in penatrable then she presses a button to have vodka gasoline oil and every single super strong alcohol imaginable then lights a match tosses it in and watches as the entire thing gang warehouse and all gets totally abliterated* hmph that outa teach you you mother fucking cock sukin BASTARD touch yugi again and ill do much worse oh i haven even begun to punish you all for this you my fucking toy slaves GOT IT from this day forward i will teach you pain like youve never been taught before ill give a full thorough lesson in pain physical mental emotional verbal and spiritual ill have you all begging for death and even then i wont give it i may let you wrot for all i care your asses are mine GOT THAT NO ONE HURTS YUGI AND LIVES YOUR GOING TO SUFFER AND YOU WILL SUFFER FOR EONS and i wont rest until this whole planet is drenched in your disgusting blood only then will u die only THEN will i truly be satisfied huh well yamimi despite that first ryou and malik NOW the Blue Eyes and seto in general have pissed me off to no end its an good story and i will warn u guys again im angry i wont stop being angry at those jerks for a loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong while well keep up the great work yamimi gtg now JA NE ^_^
person Sarah Costa
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was the most interesting thanksgiving I have it seen ^_^ ... Please continue writting. Ja ne
person Anon
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You've really got to stop posting chapters that just consist of "coming soon". Not only is it fucking annoying, I'm pretty sure it's against the rules. If you've got nothing, don't post!
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Stop stopping your torchering me!
person Sarah Costa
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What happen next? That was good. Please update soon. Ja ne
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit. I have yet to read your story, but, I just had to review after reading the summary. Could you have put anymore cades up? Dear lord, it was amazing. I thought that maybe my story was kinda overboard (though it probably will be soon since, as I'm writting it, my friends are influencing my 'evil' side), but this is insane!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! XD

Can't wait to read!


Love, Peace and Chicken Grease!!!!!
person Sarah Costa
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god...what hapen next? will Yami know that Yugi suffer from that disease that you mention before? I hope he does and forgives Yugi...Please update soon. PLEASE!! Ja
person Sarah Costa
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jou save Yugi for seeing that...I glad that Jou open Yugi's eyes...Pleae update soon. Don't forget the other stories. Ja ne
person Sarah Costa
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...Ani and Yami are crazy!!! I glad that Yugi and Yami are together. What happen next? Ryou did that and grandpa want to do something to Yami. I hope in the end Yami and Yugi be together...Please update soon Ja ne