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by Yamima

person Red Dragon Of Egypt
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RD: maybe cuz yami kept spouting cookies great there goes another word i wont be able to look at the same way again are there any more words u want to add to that list oh right pencil so now i have Come cookie and pencil to my list of words i wont i be able to look at the same way again thanks oh soooooooo much hehe jk ^__~ nyway keep up the great work and update soon gtg now JA NE ^__^
person Angel Kawaii
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol You even manage to make it funny while they are doing it. I love this story sooo much! Please update soon! Ja ne!!^^
person Angel Kawaii
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Hmm. What could he be writting? I can't wait! Ja ne!! ~_^
person Sarah Costa
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice excuse Yugi!!! HAHAHAHAH....What happen next? please update soon. Ja ne
person Angel Kawaii
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* Very good story! I love all this angst and violence. *sigh* Please update soon! Ja ne! ^^v
person Red Dragon Of Egypt
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RD: i knew it either had to be seto and his gang or ryou and malik responsible for the shooting well lets show them what happens when then the guns on the other side *grabs an AR43 and other rapid firing guns and had them set up to blast the two of them fifteen thousand times then drives them even more insane by sending pure pain rippling through there bodies then leaves them to be burned to the ground by the fires of necromancy* there short and sweet now yamimi update soon if u dont mind and i hope yugi realizes yami is not cheating on him huh i would hate to have to smack him one for being so silly i dont want to hurt him well yamimi gtg now update soon and keep up the great work JA NE ^_^
person Sarah Costa
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yami is OK!!! YAY!!! Please update soon. Ja ne
person Angel Kawaii
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are sooo evil!! I love it. I can't wait for the next chappies. Ja ne!!! ^^
person Sarah Costa
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really serious...but why did they decide to make that massacre? Please update soon. ja ne
person Red Dragon Of Egypt
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RD: heh i have to agree with you on that account yamimi guns are evil and means of a cowards way out hmph reminds me of creeds song bullet and the part were he sings "look at me when you shoot a bullet through my head* basically saying if really want to kill me look me in the eyes and do it cuz if u notice not a single person who shoots somone ever looks them in the eyes cuz they cant deal with it they cant deal with fact that there hurting someone they know its wrong but they cant stop themselves and they feel it wont be half as bad if u dont look them in the eyes hmm now i get the suspicion that whoes ever firing those guns are none other then seto and his cronies or malik and ryou speaking of wich i owe them a beating for what they did to yugi *goes off grabs malik ryou and seto and his lil cronies chains them all to the walls and beats the living shit out of them then gives them fifty thousand lashings with her diamond coated iron whips then has there counter parts (for malik ryou and seto case and for setos cronies just regular folks) marik bakura and joey tomrent them physically emotionally and mentally then sends shockwaves of pure vile magic tearing after them ripping there minds to shreds then she restores them pain still there then leaves the room bolts it down and has a tempered diamond coated windo open then she grabs her remot control and presses a button has a sworm of scarabs killer bees and carnivorous locusts and fifteen thousand colonies of fire and bull ants come out and sworm over them leaving there bodies completely mutilated then thanks to her immortal crystals they come back to life body restored but pain still fresh then she presses another button that has the ceiling fall down on them has the walls close in on them till there completly crushed then retores them again pain still there then she presses another button and sends 50,000 watts of electrcity go down there systems till there brain fry then she restores them again with the pain still there then she presses another button and has time speed up for her but slow down for them so for the next three thousand yrs(its three thousand yrs for them but for me its only an hour in our time) has them physically and mentally torn apart anf iled with her malice and evil and all the hatred that exists for them from me to every single last reviewer and finally after she has there bodies put back into place though resembling dark elves now she fill the room with a concoction of one hundred percent raw acid and lava come pouring in melting there bodies into nothing then finally after restoring there bodies again she sends them to her necromantic lair she buries them alive in seperate graves then starts a spell that turns them into mindless slaves that are ordered to torture themselves and obey all the wishes yugi has for the rest of there immortally trapped lives* well that was fun hope u liked that torture session yamimi hehe id loooooooooooooooooooooooove to see bakura top that one hehe well gtg now pls keep up the great work and update soon pls gtg now JA NE ^__^