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RD: well what would u do if u knew somone possibly hurt yugi ud tear them to pieces wouldnt you hehe and besides its fun and less hazzardous less chance of me hurting an authors feelings cuz there simply expressing their oppinions so i just take my anger out on those who trully deserve it MWAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAH with the power of Innoruuk and all the other EverQuest Gods at my aid i shall demolish the fools who dare to threaten yugi and his ever so sweet lover yami hehe and YAY im so happy yami is finally back on his feet and hes no longer upset over what he did to yugi well for the most part nyways and another thing *lightly smacks yami upside the head* goofball u were a great pharaoh ok dont u listen to that idiot rapheal he dosnt know what hes talking about i mean he says hes had those guardians of his for twelve yrs big woop youve known the dark magician for FIVE THOUSAND YRS i think u top him in that area and at least you were man enough to admit u made a mistake and are truly sry for it unlike that monster darts grr bastard NOT ONLY was he the cause of atlantis's downfall but also he dares to get his greedy hands on kaiba corp bad move chief u mess with egypt u mess with pain itself and that another thing what the matter darts ur precious great laviathon cant come forth without the egyptian god cards aiding him PAH some all powerful beast well no matter you will pay for what u did darts just the bastards in this story will pay O_O great im babbling again arent i huh well gtg now hehe update soon and keep up the great work gtg now JA NE ^__^

I like it. Party!!! What happen next? Please update soon. PWEASE PRETTY!! Ja ne.

if any of you touch Yugi, i will kill you

Okay...more nail biting...but...that's okay...I understand. Good luck with the classes. *Skips off to finish editing S&NBK Lemon*

I LOVE THIS STORY!!! What happen next? Please update as soon as you can. And YES YOU CAN JOIN THE PARTY!!!!

aww i wanted Yami to be the great leader...... :-P

RD: yay not only was that ending sooo cute but NOW i get to have new toys for me and innoruuk to play with and maybe ill let the other EverQuest Gods have a go at it mwahahhahaha now who should i play with first well i didnt like Garths reaction to finding out who the pharaoh likes so hes first SITANIK (one of my skelleton pets)gobantis conutik GET THAT BASTARD GARTH AND BRING HIM TO ME oh and be as painful as u can about it to *goes and grabs a her necromancy book and uses a black gem to call forth Innoruuk to aid her in this torture*oh great lord of hate send forth ur gracious powers of hate and violence and show this big the true meaning of taking a trip down the stream as in the stream of pure agony*walks over to the chained gagged and beaten Garth*now now pets what have i told its not near as much fun if i cant hear my toys talk back u know ungag him*gag is removed*good now were to begin *looks into her spellbook but cant think of what to do first*oh so many to choose from Innoruuk u go first*watches as the POH(prince of hate im getting tired of typing his dam name all the time)
pulls garths soul to the edge of life and death then slowly trips painful poison and disease into his system as his body gets slowly scarred and beaten from the inside out then hes striped of all flesh till hes nothing but bones*that will do for now and for the finishing touch turns garth into her new skelly pet*there all finished hehe hope that wasnt to graphic for ya author but garth had to pay and the other will to i think ill inlist the aid of Cazic Thule next time hehe he is after all the god of fear hehe well gtg now JA NE ^__^ and remember to update pls

Thank you for updating...building the suspense a little hmmm...?

I like your story. Really! It's intriguing :) and I'm deadly curious about its continuation.
I never ever reviewed before; too lazy and I don't have an account here. So er~ can you send me a notice when you update your story; if you don't mind. Keep up the good work ^^

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