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what is unat upto? please update soon!
yugi and yami are ok in the end? please update soon , this is good so far

what is unat upto? please update soon!
yugi and yami are ok in the end? please update soon , this is good so far

aww poor yami

RD: huh poor yugi he has to go through so much and that fucking bastard that stalking him is pissing me off BIG TIME *uses her powers to bring him to her torture chamber then starts using her powers to demolish him into sinders* u sick twisted fiend if i catch ur dirty wrotten hands of Yami's yugi you will DIE HORRENDOUSLY ok now on a more happier note pls up date soon and keep up the great work ME WANT MORE BADDIES TO SMASH hehe and i want to see mr night in shinning armor come to yugis aid again hehe well gtg now JA NE

*GASPS* Yugi WHAT'S HAPPENING TO YOU!!!! Oh migod he shouldn't be running, he'll lose the baby!!!!! NOOOOO!!!
Now seriously where is this going!!!! I'm on the edge of my seat here!!!

Update soon
While i wait faithfully
~hugs, fero-kun

Yugi carm down... Yami isn't going to take your baby

ok Yugi, just rme ber to tell him
are Yami and Yugi going to get married

RD: and u were wondering if i was going overboard in torturing those bastards ha i dont even know the meaning of the word * grabs her necromancy book summons up for skeleton pets and orders them to get all the bastards that dare to harm yugi and waits for them to return with said bastards then has them chained to a wall she then uses another magic spell and sents pure agony streaming through there bodies till there minds crack and they become insane then she riddles them with countless diseases and illnesses each as uncourable and as painful as the last then she left the room with orders for the two Beastlords with her to let there waders (one is a tiger pet the other is a wolf pet* have fun with there new toys but have them becarful then walks off listening to the sound of bones riping apart and screams of pain * well thats all for now oh one last thing * uses a stone to summon a portal to Innoruuk and orders one of her skeletons to inform Innoruuk that he should expect some new arrivals to play with shortly* now as i was bout to say now pls keep up the great work and update soon ive only just begone to torture these fools and pls let this story be a happy ending for yugi and yami and jou and seto gtg now JA NE ^__^

I hope that dream don't turn reality. So what happen next?...Great Chapter!!! Please update as soon as you can. Ja ne

this is soooooooooooooooooooooooo kewl... pls update asap. n e ways can't w8 til u update. ::smiling lyk a doofus bcuz i rhymed::