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RD; *firworks burst into the sky and hip hop techno celtic and african music was playing in different sections ppl dressed in fancy finery to casual yet stylish outfits fit for dancing and celebrating the joy of yugi being alive and his baby to * WOOT BOOYA hehe im so happy for yami his love and child are back babys hehe HA TAKE THAT GARTH U LOSE U BASTARD THE BABY LIVES AND SO DOES YUGI hehe ok boys get that up there *watches as a solid amythyst statue is arected showing yugi in flowing gowns with huge archangel wings behind him and the word cradled in his arms as well as his child and Yami standing behind him arms encircling his waste and wings enveloping yugis* perfect hehe well kire looks like i didnt have to shed anymore blood instead i got to shed a world wide party dedicated to yugi there baby and yami hehe congrats u three im soo happy for u and im glad about this turn of events well Kire keep up the great work and update soon gtg now JA NE ^__^*throws confettie in the air then takes a huge swig of black cherry soda* (im not an alchohol drinker so ill just leave it to good soda like ibc black cherry soda good stuff u should try it ^__^)

YES!!! YUGI AND THE BABY ARE OK!!! WHAT HAPPEN NEXT? PLEASE UPDATE. JA

yay Yami is happy, i bet he is going to be really protective of Yugi now

Does a happy gig...glomps Kiri on the head for keeping me in suspense...bows to the great one...

THAT WAS SUCH A GOOD CHAPTER!! ^_^ I LOVE IT!! ^_^ I HOPE TO READ MORE TO THIS STORY!! ^_^ I like it, it has a good plot and everything!! ^_^ PLEASE UPDATE!! ^_^

RD: grr THAT DOES THAT BASTARD GARTH IS DEAD *turns into an angel with half her body coverd black the other in white charges at Garth and his men then grabs her scimitars and decapitates them all before ripping there bodies to shredds then grabs there souls and then starts torturing there souls till there beyond recignizable when destroys all them till there nothing but ash and smoke*hmph and funny my thirst for vengence still has yet to be quenched *uses her dark magic to revive them but the pain of there deaths still remain then she sends pure vile painful magic riping through there hearts minds and souls then riddles them with disease after disease then summons skeleton servants to slowing piece by piece remove all there flesh and leave them as nothing but bones when they were finished she grabs all of there skulls then crushes them then uses the bone chips to imprison there minds to become undead servents and then inisinterates there bodies now that they are of no more use for her*there much better and ill continue to summon them to be how they were before there deaths so that way ill be able to kill them all over again until they crack and KNOW what anger and hatred truly mean *sneers in pure disgust*well now that my fun is done for the day pls keep up the great work and update soon Kire and all i have to say for my new pets sake yugis baby better live otherwise they will meet with an even MORE unfortunate end gtg now JA NE ^___^

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Nice beginning. I'm excited to read the rest.

And one thing, before i shut my big mouth. It is really nice to know already, that this is shounen-ai fic (thinks perverted things), and Yami said he was looking that 'him'. And who might that 'he' be :D
This story is gonna be good!
P.S. Bad english? I know. I'm finnish.

No.....no no no! Bad bad author! You can't do that! Get tha next chapter out soon or I'll.....i'll.....cry. Yep. I'l cry. Hard and long! FEAR MY TEARS!!! *cough* That is all.

you are an evil, evil person. so update soon to clear your name...