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for Mate in a Village

by Kirie321

person Red Dragon Of Egypt
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RD: *the storm clouds disperse and suns shining brightly with warmth and happiness and she sends the celebration on a world wide scale foods made from all over the world from begining to end in courses all sorts of drinks sent every where music and dancing is heard world wide and ppl just cheer that happy couple* CONGRATS U TWO hehe yay yuigs alive and now they have there new baby girl hehe CONRATS TO U ALL hehe now my gifts to u Kirie for such a lovely chappi *snaps her claws and summons Vishimtar and Tirranun" my two prized dragons one of the storms the other of lava and they shall smight down any flames u get *wink* plus *hands her a chest filled with potions* these potions shall grant u ways to bring u back should u suffer some kind of accident all the sweets and junk food u can stomach and free endless suplies of tickets to concerts amusment parks anything and everything ur heart desires and finally another we lil warning if u dont update soon missy ill have Tirranan make ur home his new home and hes likes things hot and i mean lava hot so if u dont want ur home to turn into a volcano i suggest ya update unless u want to see you entire neighborhood burnt to a crisp gtg now JA NE ^__^ and keep up the great work and remember to update soon or else
person Sarah Costa
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* That was a great chapter *sniff* And Yugi is ok and the baby too....*sniff* Please more. Ja
person Yami Yuugi
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi this is a really neat story you have here. I was really surprised to see a male pregnancy one that was this close to the birth since most of them are abandoned before they even make it to the delivery. Anways I really enjoyed these chapters and hope to read more soon.

-Yami Yuugi
person Yamima
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What happens' next?
person Sarah Costa
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O OH MY GOD!!! Yugi's in labor. Will he and the baby be ok? They have to be ok. Please update soon. Ja ne
person Red Dragon Of Egypt
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RD:O.O that was unnessesrily cruel your good dam even Dragondreamer and Yamidragon dont hit on the dot that good huh jeeze now im nervous poor yugi this is not going to be ez for him hehe yami better get ready to have his and squeezed to death thats all i can say in the matter but mark my words if yugi get hurt by this your going to get Garth

G: what y me i didnt do anything this time why take it out on me

RD: are u NUTS u want me to take it out on the author ur more pig headed then i thought Kire pls grant me permission to sned this pig into the darkest pits of pain and fear the likes of wich hes only ever dreamed of grant me permission to show him what its like to be at the hands of fear hate and anxiety ok now gtg but YOU missy had best update soon or ill ill unleash a monsoon so great that ill flood ur room got it hehe good (and dont worry the most ill do is give u a room sized bath but all ur stuff shall be completly proteced cuz this type of water is crystalized water the purest kind around hehe but ill still flood ya none the less)so keep up the great work and update soon or else *storm clouds start forming and they heavier and heavier waiting for their mistress to unlock the water trapped in them* gtg now JA NE ^_^
person Yana
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor Yugi
Yami please look after him
person Sarah Costa
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Yugi...He suffer so much in the past...What happen next? please update. Ja
person Red Dragon Of Egypt
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RD: huh well guess its back to blood shedding time * grabs her Scimitars and slices all of Garths men to ribbons and then takes her daggers and pins him to the walls that grabs her diamond coated iron whips and fives thim 50,000 lashings and then beats the living shit out garth and then tortures his mind and then before leaving the room fills it with a devastating curse that has the power to even over welm dragons and all life* hmph well now i feel better and Kire if u want your welcome to use this cursse but be careful or u could wipe out the entire world ok and keep up the great work and update soon poor yugi hes had a terribly wrotten past but if it werent for his righteous deeds he would have never met yami even if they did meet under nasty circumstances well gtg now JA NE ^__^
person YaoiPimp
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Squeel! I love love love you! *glomp* No more crying! *happy dance*