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by Fel5

person satisfied_frog
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More soon I hope. And hey, Jou's got the right Idea here..Let's trade cramps for eating without gaining!
person Pussycat
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*pauses to listen to numerous thuds* Ah yes, the sound of males fainting when face with the truth of female "issues". *cackles* Bless you my dear!

*falls over laughing* Kaiba's got some weird-ass ideas on how to "romance" a girl! Someone needs to whisper three words to him: candy and flowers.

Love it.... wait. Who else has ideas??

Kat

person Kathryn (who is too lazy to sign in)
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god... when I asked who else besides Kaiba wanted Jou, I had no idea... BAKURA!? *falls over laughing* Ohhhh this is gonna be goooood!

“Out of all the women I have met in this era, you are the only one fit to become the queen of thieves, and I would be a fool, if I didn’t care for you accordingly.”
You know, a romantic King of Thieves is just kinda.... scary!

AND HONDA!?

“Ja, ain’t that just the cutest thing ever!” came Jounouchi’s voice from behind them.
Turning around, the three males blanched at the somewhat crazed grin on the blonde’s face.
*gulps* This can't be good...

“I-I’ve never seen such a fake, cheerful smile in my life!”(A/N: Check your mirror! ¬ ¬)
*falls over laughing*

“You mean to tell me you actually know what hit you? I did not even see that fist coming.” He drove his tongue over his teeth in order to check if he still had a complete set and added:
“Or the foot either.”
*laughs hysterically* I'm thinking he's beginning to like the pain...

“She’s-perfect! I’ll begin immediately with the wedding preparations!”

Kaiba balled his fist and ground Bakura’s head back into the pavement, rendering the thief unconcious for good.
*howls*

“Red roses, beautiful, romantic red roses! Come on guys, buy your koi a little present to win her heart over, just 100 Yen a piece!”
*applauds* I love that! Best idea ever!

Bakura all the time baring witness with a teary, downhearted expression on his face.
*snickers* awwww, poor *snorks* Bakura... *curls up in the fetal position and howls*

person akuchan
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was just too funny. For a genius Kaiba sure can be stupid sometimes. Great chapter can't wait til the next.
Akuchan
person Satanic Mechanic
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I remember reading the first chapter...and then I kinda forgot about this fic. Then, low and behold! I had 6 chapters to read! They went by too fast for my liking. I enjoyed pms Jou muchly. More please!
person Pussycat
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhhhhh I figured you were on Sugar. *smirks*

*laughs* Jou in the bar... *cackles*

Seto did what?! *falls over laughing* He deserved being hit.

Oh my god... MOKUBA! *has complete hysterics* At least he didn't make a honking noise!

EEEEEEEEEk Jou with PMS?! No wonder they ran!!

Ohhhh, I needed this laugh today. Thanks so much for providing it.

(*snickers* You forgot Mary J in your list... )

Kat
person akuchan
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the premise of this story. Jou makes quite the kick-ass girl, gotta love it. I was laughing all the way through this chapter. Good job!!!

Akuchan
person kat
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squeals* Yaaaaaay two updates!

Plus, he had two fully functional eyes-among other bodyparts.
*cackles* Sounds very Honda-like!

Kaiba managed to hold back the nosebleed.
*snickers* barely, yes?

“You-you did this-for me?”

Kaiba pulled the girl close to his chest, reveling in the feel of her warm, soft body against his own.

“For you and no one else, beautiful”
*wonders what Felidae was smoking while writing this*

‘I’m indubitably not getting enough sleep, if I am starting to harbor such demented fantasies’ concluded the CEO, as he tried to tear his sight from the blonde.
*falls over howling* He's got some weird-ass fantasies!!

If he had known detention to be this beautiful, he would have tried to marr his school report much earlier
Ohhhh dude, he's got it baaaaaaaaaaaad.

One long finger glid over Jounouchi’s side, trailing the outline of her figure.

“Though I would have rathered you wearing a tank top.”
*shrieks in laughter* He'd probably love it if Jou wore no bra underneath too! Pervy CEO

He saw himself being kicked out of a plane, floating on the bottom of the sea with a stone tied to his neck, being eaten alive by a REBD, dumped in a container with acid and, literally, burning in hell.

The fact that Jou had systematically stabbed out every single one of the caricatures’ faces didn’t add to his comfort.
*grins evilly* Damn, wish I'd thought of that!! *cackles* Flowers and candy aren't gonna fix this one, moneybags!

Kat
person Saelbu
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story!!! ^__^
person Kat
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so sorry to hear about your grandfather!


“Good. Fine. Let’s see, so you would have to shop for size 90-C?!?”
*laughs*

Jounouchi gaped at the small, bullet-shaped white item.
Oh gods... that whole conversation had me gasping for air! Too damned funny.

She strained her ears, listening if anyone was around, then gave a smug grin, as her hand moved to her left breast and started kneading the mound experimentally.
*blinks then giggles* I know a guy who told me that if he did come back in the next life as a girl, he'd lay around and play with his breasts all day. Not saying what he said he'd play with if he came back flat-chested....

Lordy, just too damned funny!!!

*hugs* hang in there!
Kat