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by Fel5

person nicky
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bakura scares me...

lock him in a closet or something... and then let Kaiba have his way with Jou!

keep going... I can't wait to read more
person nicky
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pheww *is all relieved*
So Jou is not yet cursed forever! Thank you so much!!!!

Using an aphrodisiac is really, really mean... but it fits Kaiba, and I have to admit, I loved how close he and Jou got... *sighs*
person Glue
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(glomps) You updated on my birthday! (huggles) I lurved it! How do you produce the chappys so fast? I take FOREVER.
person nicky
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wait a second... did I get this right?
Did Bakura curse Jou for the second time? (Which would mean he's gonna stay female forever???????????)
*screeches in horror*
You wouldn't do that, would you?
I mean... I want Jou male... I want him to turn back into what he was!!!!!! And still love Kaiba.... and have Kaiba still in love with him....

Or did I miss anything? Please, please, tell me I missed something! *is deeply worried*
person Chikky
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a short chappie. But I really do like this story, I think it's funny. Keep up the good work and can't wait for another update!
person Saelbu
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I found those chapters to be quite entertaining. Update soon. ^__^
person Anon
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, awesome, awesome! XD I'm lovin' it! This is like the best of this plot I've read yet. Totally great. Lol. And..

"And all of a sudden, they heard a familiar voice shouting words, that made Yami’s hair stand up straight."

Doesn't most of Yami's hair stand up straight anyway? 0o;;;
person Glue
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(waves) Hello! (grins) Me likes. Rather muchly. And Jou seems rather confused about if she likes Kaiba or not, ne?

When I first read summary, I didn't expect it to be anything remotly to this.

BTW, what day are we on? Still in the first two weeks? I'm confused time wise. Or did Yami case the spell so many times that its irreversible? That confused me a bit.

I did enjoy the whole selling of the roses for 100 yen a piece.

So...Kaiba likes both forms of Jou, correct? He just happens to like Girl-Jou a bit more. (guessing, since he didn't swoon over Guy-Jou.)

Ner...is Jou's bike really -that- impressive? (I don't know anything about cars...I've only just learned how to use the back window defroster...)

Hmm...(re-read a bit of chap 11.) Is that really Kaiba's intent with the snacks? (And does it actually work out for Jou as she says it does? Geesh. Lucky girl if so...)

(grins, waves and glomps)
person katsu kaijou
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story has to be one of the best out there.
the only ones better or by maggiemay.
please keep writing on this.
thanks
person mistryl
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*roars in laughter* beautiful, absolutely marvelous. This had me near tears cause I was laughing so hard! More Bakura! He's hilarious but glad Kaiba finally got some and some more trouble!