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by lucterna

person laineyue
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update soon! little intrigued in the uniqueness of the physical properties of the reader char but guess its ok. nice plot!

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person Dawna
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWSOME!!!!! CYOA's are rare now a days. In cace you dont know what a CYOA is its short for choose your own adventure stories, and I love those the most, please can you write another one just like this one? PLEASE!!!!! I REALLY LIKED IT!! I LOVE YOUR STORIES AND UPDATE SOON!!!!!
person Hotaru1421
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue writing this. I quite enjoyed it. Please e-mail me when you update this.
person Meriah (too lazy to log in)
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eee! This is so *good!* Very well written and thought out. Please continue ASAP ^_^
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great. Please Update soon I really wanna know what happens next. Is it going to be one sided Bakura or One sided Priest Seth? If there are going to be different paths can't one lead to where we wind up with Priest Seto?
person Aeri
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo, so you posted it on here as well!!! Well I really love it, and maybe you could post some others on too? ^0^
person Ametank
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you know...this will always be fabulous :-*
person MarikIshtar77
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely written! It was fun to read and I liked the setting. I was REALLY happy to see you know your stuff about ancient Egypt too. I get so irritated when people write useless drivel and don't check their facts before they write. Thank you for that, I really appreciate it. Even without ygo dudes in it, I'd want to read more of this.
person Dani
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I read this story on e-fiction, but I still enjoyed it the second time! Please update!