rate_review Reviews

This was absolutely beautiful *sniff* One of the best things I have ever read o O wow...im just so shocked and so speechless...I think my mouth is still gaping!! You've made me love Kaiba in a whole new way. Instead of having him always aggressive and cold you gave him a weakness. Holy shit I was grinning like the joker through the whole thing. Such a lovely combo. I felt like I just read a novel length thing and its only been 4 chapters ^_^. I was a little surprised that it wasn't Yami/Kaiba but I got over that pretty quickly eh lol. I usually hate fluff and this was fluffy but I fucking loved it!!! I squealed like a bitchy little fangirl *hugs* cudos to you. I salute you and bring you this chorus sung by dancing leemers. Your just that awesome!

RM~

Absolutly supetablous! Well written. I love how kaibe seemed to revere yugi. Almost holding him in God-like significance. I LOVED it!!!!!!!!!!

Like any of your stories I've read so far I love this one! ^_^x I'm not really a fan of Yugi, but I found that I'd read any pairing if it's written by you. So I guess I'm your fan! ^^x
Let the smut rule! Woohoooo!

~Horizont

I loved it . . . I would however, like to see a sequal. Seto coming to terms with Yami should be interesting.

I enjoyed it very much. The Yugi/Seto lemon was beautiful...and I think Seto got more than he expected; passion rather than passive acceptance. And love.

Great ending!

Interesting...a little to much bullshiting and not enough BDSMing ::turing green:: ...too much of Bakura's need are fullfilled too fast::anger rising::...sex scene ::grins evilly:: very nice...overall exceptable...HOWEVER I will want to see more of your stories...and none of the Yami joins in shit...that's ridiculous...Seto needs Yugi to himself...in a dungeon...in leather...and bondage...::smirks:: gotta go!

For one that professes to dislike Kaiba, you write him magnificently well. o.O Your capability to capture his arrogant pride, accompanied with his inner fallibility (namely in his perpetual failure to admit that he cares for others, aside from Mokuba, which you also suggested within the fic…) is beautifully admirable! Methinks, from your first major adult-themed fanfic, (at least the first of yours that I have read ^_^) you have also improved in the more graphic scenes; you have “grown into” your language more highly. ^_^ Initially, I disagreed slightly with the declaration that Kaiba prefers Omote Yuugi to his more shadowed persona, but despite that, (Once, whilst he was dueling with Yami Yuugi during the Duel Tower Alcatraz arc of the actual series, he proclaimed in one of the most suggestive speeches I have ever heard, "[in our battles] you have pushed both my mind and my physical strengths to their limits! Your existence summons a thrill from my entire body!" XD) I am thoroughly addicted! Please continue; I am eager to read more!

This is becoming quite interesting indeed!

SETO FUCKING YUGI DAMNIT WHAT IS SO HARD WITH WRITING THIS? I SWEAR ONE MORE CLIFF HANGER...lets just say you don't want to know! YOU WERE SO CLOSE TO ACTUALLY ALLOWING THEM TO FUCK!!! ::screams:: AND ALL YOU DO IS LET YUGI TOUCH SETO...you are trying to kill us through sexual frustration aren't you AREN'T YOU?! One more chance for a hot hardcore Yugi screaming lemon, understand?

i love Seto and Yugi
i hate Bakura