rate_review Reviews

so cool. you like, created this alternate scenario that is such a refreshing change to the series and everybody elses fics. like who is freinds with who, how they act, and even bumping some characters status among the series (i.e noa) and changing characters personalities altogether. (i.e, yami) but i definelty like it. please continue!

I'm really enjoying this story so far! Between Noa's and Seto's inner dialogue, the story had me reeling! I couldn't help but laugh! Noa's personality is a nice change, one that is highly likable, along with the rest of the cast. It's nice to see how you have rearranged the whole YGO cast; I can definitely see Bakura, Honda, and Jou hanging out! In fact, I often fantasize...but that's another story. I do hope you will update soon because the plot is really starting to get good! I can't wait to see how the other couples will ultimately end up together! Oh...and I'm glad to see Keith in a non-pervy/rapist role; it's refreshing and well-written.

Yeah, the name isn't my fault! My friends thought it'd be funny, for no apparant reason! Anyway, what I really wanted to ask is, "are you gonna continue with the story?" Well, are ya, huh, huh? I like it, I really do. Please...please do. I'll wuv you a lots...please! Anyway, that is all there is for me to say.

Dear Gods...
XD I love your fics, I swear...
*adoration and love*
Whether it's the humor, or the intriguing plot, your writing captivates me.
Very well done ^___^
*hearts*
~YRE

AAAHHHH!
You and your evil ciffies. Do you ever finish anything? I need more. More I tell you.
Have a lemon pie and a cookie.
Now, GET TO WORK.

cool story i love it yea :)

Love this story please ontinue writng this great fic

Great story. I loved the last little bit of this chapter with Honda and his family, t'was quite amusing.
Akuchan

This story just gets better. Please keep writing.

konnchi-wa
i dont mean to be a smart ass but the marks on jou's rib i thought his dad never laid a hand on him rember?
"The man was always more than happy to let Jou know how worthless he was and how he wished he’d never been born. It could have been worse because at the least the man never tried to raise a hand to him, but sometimes his words cut deeper than actual fists ever could."
yeah but i think its better his dad really dose hit him. (i'm so sadistic)
anyways love the story so far you really must update.
But dose seto-kun have to be so mean?
yugi's not in it much is he? (wich is a improvement cause most fics its all about him)
and you also made me see noa in a new light (i've always hated him and saw him as a spoiled brat!)
just one more question where's marik or malik?
UPDATE!!!! ANSWER MY QUESTIONS!!!!! PLEASE!!!!???!!!!