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by Yamima

person Iyasu
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Uh-uh. First off, kill the script format. Secondly, if you *must* use script format, put some spaces in there so that it's not all bunched up. Thirdly, use punctuation! That's what it's there for!
person yami nefertira
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eeeee that was funny. well done yamimi. ^_^
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA! Funny, short, but funny...
person Trinity
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHA i find this very funny and amusing (in a good way) it was funny i was lmao
person Anon
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You do know that chat/script formating is against AFF's TOS, right? You do know what a TOS is, right? If so, why do you keep breaking it? If not, go away since you obviously need to learn how to read first.
person Yamima
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG ANNON OFF MY BACK, IT'S A STORY OK!
I like it this the way it is. I'm not chatting, if I was I'd go to chat!
person Sarah Costa
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was funny...Please update soon. ja ne.

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