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February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have a feeling that Seto wil be saying *open mouth insert foot* in laer chapters in't he? *giggles* damn Yami, stubborn idiot.....*grumbles* will he ever say anything about what he did?
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February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yami and Seto sure are stubborn SOBs. ;-) I'm looking forward to reading what is behind that little smile/smirk of Yami's...
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter : ) Seto's balls must be made of solid steel, to be thinking of taking Yami on verbally. Physically it won't be a problem at the moment, but verbally and mentally . . . oh yeah, I hope Seto has his cup.
DracOnyx
DracOnyx
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! you had me at the edge of my seat for most of it, especially at the john doe part. I was afraid that Yami was dead!!! *bites nails* nerve wracking!!!! (to say the least) please update soon!!!!! please? I'll give you a cookie.......
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January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH! *grips hair tightly* You simply must update again, and soon! What a horrible place to leave it! I think you actually qualify for worse cliff-hangers than me!
DracOnyx
DracOnyx
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I apologize for not reviewing sooner. I'm hooked on this. You're weaving such a fascinating story. I find myself on the edge of my seat during each chapter. I like how you're developing the different characters and I can't wait to see what's next.
Keep it the fantastic work!
Kat
Keep it the fantastic work!
Kat
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January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH! CLIFFHANGER!
People say I do it, too . . . and I'll admit I do. Keep's the readers reading, right? Anyway, can't wait for more, please update soon.
DracOnyx
People say I do it, too . . . and I'll admit I do. Keep's the readers reading, right? Anyway, can't wait for more, please update soon.
DracOnyx
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Now then . . . more please? Pretty please?
DracOnyx
DracOnyx
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a great bad ass Yami is turning out to be! 8-)
This story has a very good beginning. The character development is good and I like the pace at which the plot is developing. Your style of writing is excellent. 8-)
I'm looking forward to seeing what the next chapter brings...
This story has a very good beginning. The character development is good and I like the pace at which the plot is developing. Your style of writing is excellent. 8-)
I'm looking forward to seeing what the next chapter brings...
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January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
better and better. Can't wait to see what happens next.
DracOnyx
DracOnyx