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for Hope for Tomorrow

by ShadowDragon

schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful fic! Very unique plot and generally well-written all around. I love forward to your next update.
person leighc for shy
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Here's the shymaster's review...minus her shyness^_~It pays to have a best friend.

Shy: Oh my. Poor Yami. I want to just hold him and make it all better. I'm so very jealous. Pretty please keep up the good work.
person Kathryn Coll
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gods... I'm so sorry that I've been remiss in reviewing! Each chapter has become so much better than the one before it. It's just such an amazing tale. The interaction between everyone is great. I loved Mai's comments. Their first kiss... Oh wow, even the emotions around that. Now I understand why Yami has become this way. I can't wait to see how he'll react to waking up next to Seto. I can't help but hope that they come to understand each other.

Kat
person Raven of Darkness Shadows
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapters. I really like it, and I don't read Yami/Seto fics often. This fic is awesome!!! Don't forget ta update, and I'll try not to forget ta read it. Bye-bye now.
person DracOnyx
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU'RE KILLING ME HERE!!!!!!!! GAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!

More . . . please . . . soon!!!!

DracOnyx
person Maykia
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I only have two word to say about that chappie...Please Update! OMG I love this story so much.!
person Draza
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! you updated!!! glade it came along! damn, yami's gonna be PISSED (under statement of the YEAR) when he wakes up!!
person leighc for shy
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How do. Don't recolect if I've introduced myself yet or not. I'm Leighc, a friend of Shy's. She asked me to do her reviews. They're her words....just without shy and shyly typed in them^_~

So...here be Shy's review: "Oh my goshness. I wasn't expecting that at all. The kiss I mean. Yay for updateness. Pretty please keep up the good work.

I must agree with her, this fic is great. So yeah, keep it going!
person aspiker
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good stuff! 8-) This story gets better and better. I am particularing enjoying the development of the characters and the timeing of the plot --> Not too fast, not too slow.
person MayMay
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is one of the best storyies I have ever read. I really hope you update it ASAP cause I love reading it.