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for Hope for Tomorrow

by ShadowDragon

person shyy and leighc
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh you wicked evil woman you, leaving us with such terrible cliffies *gives a mock growl before winking* You're very brave hun. Thank God you updated, shy and I were bout to go into fits of withdrawl. Now if only Seto can look past the darkness and see Yami in the light. *pushes the shy one forward with both hands clamped on her shoulders so she won't run* Your turn babe.

*shyly bites lower lip while staring at the floor* I...Um...ever so shy and quiet yayness for updateness *shyly cuddles the update* It...it was so shyly nice to be able to read this before work. *gives a shy glance at leighc who just shakes her head with a stern gaze* Any....anyshylyway....I..I shyly hope this does have a sappy happy ending and...and....um...pretty shyly please keep up the good work and more soon yes?

*lets go of the shyness who then scurries off* Oy. She is right though, wonderful to read before a day in hell. Do update when you can hun and keep it up!
person tweety
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bad Keno, bad bad bad Keno!!! Leave poor Yami alone!!! :(

great chapter, waiting for more! :D
person shy and leighc
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As a reviewer once said to my shy one.....OH NO YOU DIDN"T! I so totally cannot believe you just did that. I mean, I knew I had a funny feeling bout that Keno when he came onto scene but it's just so unfreakn fair! *takes a deep breath* Okay, better now. Sorry hun, just wasn't expecting that. Keep up the good work and I'll let shy give you some chocolates for being such a good writer ^_~ *pushes shy forward and whispers in her ear* Go on now.

*shyly bites lower lip while timidly holding out a box of home made chocolate chip cookies and blushing a thousand shades of crimson* I.....I'm ever so very shyly sorry for...for leighc's outburst. It's...well....we really weren't expecting that. But...um...shy and quiet yayness for updateness *shyly huggles the update* I...I oh so shyly hope this has a good ending. *shyly leaves the cookies and runs to hide*

She's right, I do apologize. Keep it up!!!!!! Chow mein.
person DracOnyx
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH! Vile Dragon, vile . . . but you're right, it's angst, so we should be used to it. can't wait to see where you're heading with this, and I hope you update soon.

DracOnyx
person FlamesAngel
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SO SWEET!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
person tweety
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwww, that was so sweet!!! :D *sniff sniff* poor Yami......
person Draza
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww....*sniff sniff* that was so...*fans self vigorously* HOTTT!!!!!!!
person Arsinen
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet I can't wait for more. Please update soon. ^_^
person DracOnyx
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*claps wildly* About damn time Yami opened the hell up! Great chapter hun, very well done. Can't wait to see more.

DracOnyx
person shy and leighc
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ever so shy and quiet yayness for updateness *shyly huggles the update*

*gently pushes Shy aside* You just made that shy girl's millenium^_^ Okay ya made mine too! Shy almost started crying...especially after reading the words "he cried." And that song....we give it two thumbs up.....*sees the shyness highness is done squeezing the life out of the update*

*blushes a thousand shades of crimson* Pretty shyly please keep up the good work. I so shyly hope...that...well that there's a happy ending.

That goes for me too. Keep up the goodness!!!!!

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