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for The Mistakes We Make

by Taiorami

person ShadowofLight
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh boy i can't wait to see everyone else's reaction!! so far it's cool but now i ogtta know what happens to the rest of hte story!
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really good story so far!!! I can't wait to see where this goes and how Bakura and Seto take the news of impending fatherhood! Keep up the great work and please update soon!!!
person anubiset
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy, um, maybe girl, what are they having anyway? Okay, um, shocked her, sorry. Please update soon. I gotta know what is happening. Especially with Joey, that didn`t make sense. He doesn`t seem to be the one that would do something like that, especially with his parents being divorced and all. anyway. Update soon. pwease. (puppy dog eyes).
person mrpointyhorns
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
COOL! I liked that post more soon!
person Silvershadowfire
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I have to say I don't normally go for male preg, but the concept intrigued me, and I love how you started out! Please keep going, and if it's not too much trouble could you e-mail me when you update? Thanks.
person SphinxTeleia91
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was wonderful! I myself write some Male pregnancy fanfics. It's hard to do but fun to see the reactions of the reviews ou get. You did a great job on the first chapter. Keep going! I want to read more! I want to know how Bakura feels about this.
person Yana
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
soo ummm Yugi is pregnant with Yami's and Seto's child???